Nice, Thanks for the chapter.

It would be nice if Luna use the Royal "We" in some of her dialogues, like this one:

“My rear is just as bouncy as the pink one’s butt,”

Would be "Our rear is just as bouncy as the pink one’s butt,”

Just a light suggestion... You still rocking this story.

Thank you for the chapter

That was fun! Hoping for more!

I need more of this, I hope for more chapters

A person who goons all the time have nothing to think of but edging

Im loving this fic.... also,

“My rear is just as bouncy as the pink one’s butt,” Luna was muttering to herself as we stood in the town’s library. Well, normally it was the library, currently it was host to an impromptu sleepover, as no one wanted to make the walk home after the night they had. While Twilight had an actual bed upstairs, and apparently there was a young dragon already sleeping upstairs that I didn’t get a chance to meet.

Luna's jealous that she didn't win isnt she?~
And i bet Celestia's is more bouncy... all that cake has to go SOMEWHERE after all!

Oooh, idea, celestia thinks she doesnt deserve to sleep with our mc, because luna already has him and she feels like nightmare moon was HER fault, luna ends up pinning her down, going crotchtit to crotchtit, and magicly grabs the mc's dick, readjusting it so it enters CELESTIA'S pussy instead of her own. "then you can repay me by being the one he impregnates instead" (or something to that effect, i had dialouge and everything but forgot it when i sat down to type it up.)

This story is…something. Let’s see where this goes I suppose.

I'm just loving the banter between everyone. And kek Pinkies couldn't help but fuel the fire

“Time to go.” I sped up, laughing slightly as Luna cried out for us to stop, demanding that I test the bounciness of her rear end immediately.

Ok, that one got me to crack up out loud