Thanks for the laughs.

Nice. Anyone else hope this turns into an actual story with stuffing on the side?

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I got some stuff thought out, some from the original version, some new. Just haven’t settled on when exactly I’ll be putting it in. Should hit the timeskip point soon though, get into proper story stuff.

Ponks is really horny here... Strangely for this type of story is quite fitting for her to be the most open about this...

Thanks for the chapter

So what craziness is luna probably planning everyone think. Having a vacation home built in ponyvile and the main 6 hired as "workers" there. She sends offers to each of them later after getting in as princess for them to become consorts. Talk about what would be a wild letter in the mail.

Im just thinking how luna will love a getaway as a possibility as well as offers for the girls there that where helping the nightmare problem with fair offers that fit from the era she is from along with the devil on her shoulder that is nightmare as well just how luna is now loving alot of what's happening much less her wanting to stick it to Celestia.

Oh noooooo, Im addicted to this story…. I need more 🥺

A good entertaining story so far keep it up.

How come no anthro this time (nudist Equestria would be an absolute paradise for Heartfire)?

“Presenting, the new nominal ruler of Equestria,” Yep, now it was a sinking feeling. “And,” Luna met her eyes, baring her new fanged grin at her. “I believe the official title in the paperwork is ‘Crowned stud’ or as my sister once said,” Oh, oh no, she wouldn’t dare. “The stallion who would stuff her so full of his seed that she wouldn’t be able to walk straight.” Oh, she did dare.

you know, this kinda means that he HAS to go to canterlot now, luna just played herself.

Edit: now that i think of it, kinda suprising there was no cumbulge mentioned, pretty sure a cervix would close and hug that man cream tightly inside that womb.

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Mostly due to it being how the muse wanted to write things this time.

I think Luna just played herself cause he has to go to Canterlot now. Least this means Celestia can smug at her.

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Hope you keep at least some of the points from the original. The original ended right as Gilda was gonna be introduced which was likely to have a sexy outcome involving Cosmos fucking her into a mind break.