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Oh that's why Canaryprime didn't show the other mares filled like with Thunderlane. They weren't. so no point.

Thought that picture looked familiar, cant wait to read the story:twilightblush:

This was a nice story and I can accept the Wonderbolts being a buch of slutty sex maniacs.

Hey I've seen that pick before 🤔
Very nice story! Love it!

11 months later.... a future ''super'' Wonderbolt foal was born.... one that contained both their combined stamina! XD
EDIT: Make that 4 foals.... Spitfire did say Soarin was full of potion induced ''super'' cum...... LOLOLOL

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I stand corrected.

There's really only one appropriate reaction for this fiction.

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Or it'll be a new sex crazed dark lord that was born of the potions. Kind of like Voldemort.

She wasn’t entirely sure why, but Spitfire had made it crystal clear that she and a few of the other female Wonderbolts were to ‘take it easy and preserve their stamina’.

Poor guys...

“Had to give him a quickie before he went home again?” Fleetfoot murmured, snickering to herself and earning a snort from Misty.
Rainbow rolled her eyes, scoffing at her teammate's remark. “No, not this time at least. Dunno why you always gotta bring that up. Pretty sure we’ve all messed around with Thunderlane at one point or another.”

Who can blame them?

“Turns out, the idiot had been taking a potion to suppress his urges and sexual output. Said it helped him focus on training, and not our flanks, during practice.” Spitfire chuckled. “Seems our fat asses in uniform are so tempting, magic brews are the only escape.”

To be fair, he was in quite a predicament here.

Rainbow perked up, her blush returning with haste. “H-hang on! All four of us, together here, fucking him?”

“Yup,” Misty followed, moving over and caressing Rainbow’s flank with a wing. “It’s not like you haven’t had some fun with each of us too.”

Fleetfoot came up on Rainbow’s other side, throwing a smug grin at her. “Plus, I’m sure we all agree having the four of us howling with pleasure together makes it all the more kinky.”

Can't argue with that logic.

“Need you to focus on practicing, big guy,” Spitfire cooed, swaying her hips as she eyed him up lustfully. “And since you aren’t using that potion anymore, somepony seems awfully pent up.“

Which leads me to my main question:
Why did he stop taking the potions in the first place?
Maybe the pressure became to great, and his doctor or potion maker had advised him to release some steam?


Good story, but very long.
I'll continue the rest later.

I would suggest you to split your stories into smaller chapters to make it easier to read them piece-by-piece.
But you seem to prefer fewer and longer chapters, because that what most of your other stories look like.

I’m pretty sure I know what Soarin new nickname is… Captain Creampie 🥧

He was very clearly ready and able to keep going, and the notion of being fucked and filled so much she’d be left a quivering mess on the floor made Rainbow’s mouth go dry.

I'm sure he is willing to wet her mouth again.
And give her a protein drink at the same time.

Foreplay wasn’t her strongest suit, though she had gotten pointers from Rarity in the past about the ways to make a stallion swoon with some good wing motions and the right movements of the tongue. Odd a unicorn knew so much about wingjobs, but it was certainly now or never to make use of what she learned.

:duck:: "Darling, what do you think Fluttershy and I do when we are at the spa together?"

Pegasi kept very good care of their wings, preening them and all that, but here she was, slickening her feathers in cum and jerking off a huge cock with them.

Don't forget to preen them again once you are finished.
But make sure everyone gets a good look.

“You seriously think myself and the other gals got fucked senseless that easily?” Spitfire continued. “Turns out, that potion of Soarin’s had some gnarly side effects. One of them being it made his cum an absurdly intense aphrodisiac.” She shrugged. “And since he’s now finally letting loose, all that magic cum is pumped into us, and the second he slams into us, it hit us full force.”

Sounds great!

“Point stands, Dash. You tapping out?”
Rainbow clenched down on Soarin’s cock, feeling her body dancing with an electrifying sensation. Even with her body alight with pleasure unlike any other, she knew she could keep going. She was one damn determined mare, and if she had to milk him dry for the next ten hours…then Celestia dammit she would. Winning mattered. Proving herself, even when it came to something this absurd, mattered. She’d sate Soarin’, or she’d pass out in a pool of cum trying.

:trollestia:: "That's the spirit I expect from the Element of Loyalty!"

So, ultimately, it was a grand success. Possibly the best sex session she’d ever have in her life, a big win for her to tease the others about, and cider! What could get better than all that?

Just wait for it...


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

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