After the events that followed the Wonder-Colt 3, Silhouette Shield and Zed the Zony (or Zorse) are engaged to be married! An old friend of Sillie's has returned from their hometown, and after much catching up all three spend a wonderfully romantic night together after a conversation turns towards love.
Months pass, and as Silhouette returns from a training break, she finds her friend in very poor health, alone, and nearly dying. She has her beloved Zed meet her, and the story of their very special Unicorn friend gets worse.
Story involving an untraditional type of Love, and a tragedy that befalls all involved. Warning, while sex will not be described in the story, yes it is a consensual triad relationship. The focus is on the tragedy however, not the untraditional relationship. If I had a tag for it, I would place this under a bittersweet story.
Please rate and comment, as I felt this story was a good one to share
Cover art by AlissaLuvsU
This is beautiful! You could post it as it is in my opinion and I think many will love it.
I did spot a few gramatical errors, but those few were rare and minor.
I am not certain on how it could be expanded honestly. There comes a time when the addition of one more sequin, or that one extra stitch, ruins a fine dress. The same can be said about a fine story, and this story is wonderful as it is in my humble opinion.
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I thank you for checking this over. I did go into the story and described the characters a little more. Most people know what an Opliptera (bat-winged pegasi. Credit for the name goes to Vargas) looks like, but I felt a Zony should be explained a bit more, as well as the other character.
Commentary, this story is somewhat based upon a couple friend I knew of who lost a baby some years back. No, we weren't involved like that, but the sense of sadness portrayed was genuinely remembered.
1499172 My condolences on your friends loss. I myself cannot fathom the grief she had to have been feeling, but I know it had to have been devistating. I pray that she is doing better now.