I'm just kidding. This is actually a really wholesome story about filly Twilight and Shining Armor being brother and sister.
I'm gonna be totally honest, I suck at descriptions and use them as an outlet for the stress putting myself in a different body and location to write- well it impacts my brain and the comical nature of descriptions and how bad I am at summaries that don't sound like the Blu-ray disk teaser trailers for a Michael Bay transformers movie and-
Just read the thing. God help me.
(Idea extracted from BifauxnenStroganoff)
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Best. Description. Ever!
Gonna go read now.
Edit: Good read.
What do you mean by that?
Before I saw the E rating and the tags, I genuinely thought Purplesmart Filly would do a stabby-stab. She did not do a stabby-stab, but it's okay because this is still cute and I need to go pour some Feelios and get a box of tissues.
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I'm glad you liked it <3
Ok, this warmed my heart and made my day. Good stuff.
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It was super really cute!!! Love it!! Cute cute! Silly little filly
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Thank you, and love your pfp.
That was so precious and adorable
The descriptive language at the beginning was wild. Love it.
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Thank you both.
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Readers who liked this story might also enjoy: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/517420/wednesdays-are-sacred . (I will be adding a reciprocal link.)
It also is an E rated story with Good people being violent for sweet reasons. There the violence actually occurs, rather than being avoided, but the target was a genuine threat.
Hmmm... Also, for the aspect of what an intelligent combatant can do with household items, one might try the teen rated "A Little Game of War". Not linked, because: Teen.
EDIT: Neither of these are my stories, I gave reciprocal links, and I can do at least as well as the automated system in making suggestions (I give specific reasons for the suggestions for one thing.). In short, what is up with the two down votes I go as of this edit?
Adorable.
Titles was a bit deceiving, making me thank this was a bit of a crack/comedy fic, but this was quite a nice piece of heartwarming sibling shining/twilight fluff reading. Great job. Original premise, good dialog, and great depiction of all canon characters. Keep up the great work!
no need to cook yourself
Recorded myself reading this for an Audiobook version to come soon!
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Lol, for some context this was... that is, the story itself, was made more accidentally when someone posted the story art and I made the blank as a joke with no context for what story to write with it. Basically, the image inspired me to make the Title card, and somebody said "Write a story, you won't." And then I just had to, and as a bonus challenge, I made myself do it in under an hour.
The hour time limit is why the LD was simply me 'honest trailer'ing myself because I already have no clue how to LD and wasn't going to waste any time on it.
That's also why the title card and the actual story itself are kinda unrelated. It's accidental clickbait.
This was cute
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adorable clickbait
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We take those in this house
I thought this was gonna be more twiggles-like joke, but I'm pleasantly surprised at how different it ended up!