Canterlot City, a city of action and magic.
Protected by a team of powerful superheroes ready to use their powers to take up great responsibility, lead by the Friendly Neighborhood Spider-Man.
This time however, as Spider-Man struggles to juggle his personal and superhero life, all while helping out his team with and without the mask, a new threat rises up from the fall of Wilson Fisk, The Inner Demons, looking to take down the corrupt system of power in Canterlot and will stop at nothing to watch it fall. But even after them a far more personal battle awaits the Wall-Crawler.
Now facing danger, love, betrayal, truth, and tragedy, Spider-Man and his team will need all the help they can get to protect Canterlot and restore order and justice to the city.
Co-writer https://www.fimfiction.net/user/366238/HarryBuilder
This one’s pretty good also is Peter and twilight going to be together I really loved that ship Peter x twilight.
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Uh no, sorry pal. But there are going to be like siblings to each other
Is venom getting involved? I could see him being a leathal protector cause of Sunset Shimmer helping him put difference between him & Spider-man aside. Plus it be interesting how the girls react to venom.
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This is just a remake of the first game me and Harry are doing
I’m looking at the picture for your story and I can already tell that this involves the Sinister Six. I recognize four of the members being Otto Gunther Octavius (Doctor Octopus), Maxwell “Max” Dillon (Electro), Adrian Toomes (Vulture), and MacDonald “Mac” Gargan (Scorpion). The other two at the top of the picture, however, I don’t know.
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Oh. Well I hope you guys get the chance to do the other marvel Spider man games. Because it be interesting how they interact.
Well this is awesome story nice job can't wait for more
So will there be some changes later on like with black cat because in the game she was still a villain right
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It's Aleksei Sytsevich ( Rhino ) and Martin Li ( Mr. Negative ).
I LOVE IT, MAN!
???: My children, Fisk the kingpin of crime, has fallen The time has come for us to climb out of the dark, shadowy pits of the city and rise to power and take what is ours. Go my SWARM FEED! "
Children of the swarm: " Yes our QUEEN! "
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We're sort of replacing her with the prowler
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Oh so she will betray everyone at some point
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No. She be more like their informant on supervillains such as the demons
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What about her relationship with peter will they break up or something
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You'll just have to wait and see
I have to say you did a great job on the first chapter of this. The dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are all well done. I really appreciate the effort to include Miles (already in his super-hero alter-ego) AND Gwen (as Ghost Spider) in addition to the Girls with their own super-hero alter-egos (and I'm guessing either in their last year of high school or their first year of college). The gang already knowing how to work as a team was an excellent touch. And Celestia is running against Osborn? Yeah, good luck. Politics are a dirty business, even/especially with actual good intentions. Definitely like the touch of Gwen's father being the police commissioner and Shining being a Lieutenant, since that adds a couple more "Friends on the Force".
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Yeah. I could definitely see that. The Girls having to deal with Chrysalis' counterpart and her minions would be a good way to keep the Sinister Six from being TOO easy though having three Spider heroes instead of one should still at least make it SEMI-manageable.
I like it but Isee the name of Yuri with Shining is are both in the story or a confusion mewaile in the writing.
And how got the idea include to spidergwen and miles morales siperman?
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Why thank you. I did had help building it
So this is an interesting take on a crossover type beat, putting the girls in there, but also having Gwen and Miles as part of the Spider crew already. I think most of the dialogue additions to accommodate this fact works pretty well, and even Miles already being Spider-Man doesn't change things... too much? At least not in adapting the first game, might be different depending on how and if you do Miles Morales. I think this is a good start to things, best of luck to you and your friend in not only covering the whole story of Spider-Man PS4 but also making sure that such a large cast also gets a decent amount of time in a story like this, that cannot be easy.
Maybe Agent Venom, too? Please.
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This is based off of the first Marvel's Spider-Man game for the PS4. There's no Venom in it yet
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Oh no, poor Flash.
Don't you mean CONFISCATED? XD
I really gonna love it. I'm sorry to Flash for losing his dad. I play Marvel Spider-Man, Marvel Spider-Man Miles Morales, and Marvel Spider-Man 2. And beat the games.
Are you planning on doing the other games to after this one
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I do have played them and beat them as well. They were very funny
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What do y'all think about this though?
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Well l liked ultimate spider-man if you want to ad the team then go for it
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Sure
12129926 Yes, please. I loved the spider man series!
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Yes, it is. Action and stealth too. Postscene like Marvel Spider-Man 3.
So if Black Cat and MJ are a couple, who's Peter's lover?
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Both of them are in love with Peter so I think the two girls really want to be with him.
calling it now: Peter, Felicia, and MJ become a threesome (or whatever the proper term is) by the end of the story, which is fairly good so far, btw ^^;
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Good guesses
Nice chapter.
Also, when would Spiderman's teams like Iron Fist, White Tiger, Power Man, and Nova show up?
Now this is amazing! And interesting too! And the party is chaos with negative energy. When I play this game. It was fun!
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Yup.
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I'm sorry, do you see you sex tag anywhere on the story?
This is why I don't like MJ in the story; She hated being the damsel in distress so much that she basically risked everyone's' lives in Grand Central Station just to prove that she doesn't need anyone to protect her. Sure Peter's overprotective behaviour can be annoying, she basically became arrogant to the point where she just went in GCS without a plan. I mean what was she gonna do when she encounters Martin Li and the Inner Demons?
The only reason that she 'saved' GCS was because she contacted Peter to help out, proving that she can't do it right on her own. And she has the nerve to say "think we both have different ideas about this whole 'partner' thing", like THAT'S her excuse for being reckless.
Oh Yeah, Spidys old team is hear and ready to save the day BOOM!
New and old team come together as one! Woohoo!
What does normal mean by his first responsibility that is he going to hurt celestia or something because his going against him
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I believe the term you're searching for is "polyamory".
Can we please get a prequel to this story this I need to see Spiderman vs twilight sparkle
I think the next book is equestria girls spiderman flash sentry then equestria girls spiderman 2