Marcus Sahanni has spent years lost in the rhythm of smoky dive bars and half-empty clubs, his saxophone singing to an audience that barely listens. Alongside his closest friends—Devon, the steady-handed cellist; Sahid, the sharp-tongued trumpet player; and Selina, the punk-loving drummer—he’s played the same circuits, fought the same uphill battles, and watched dream after dream fade under the weight of overdue bills and broken promises.
But when a sharply dressed stranger walks into their bar with an offer too good to be true, everything changes.
The proposal? A contract to perform in another world—Equestria. A land of wonder, magic, and most importantly, a hunger for music. The Equestrian Crown is offering free lodging, real gold as payment, and a chance to be among the first human musicians to bridge the gap between two cultures.
It’s an opportunity beyond their wildest dreams. But is it worth the risk?
As the quartet prepares to leave behind the only life they’ve known, they can’t help but wonder—will they just be an alien novelty, a passing fascination in a world not their own? Or is this their shot at something more—fame, fortune, and perhaps even a home in a place they never imagined?
One thing is certain: the next time Marcus picks up his saxophone, he won’t just be playing for survival.
He’ll be playing for a new beginning.
Alright I’m invested and staying
This... more, please.
I love it when people are able to translate music to the written word. I love it more when it is done so well.
Music is the purest expression of emotion. Becoming lost in it is like breathing: you forget you're doing it until the gentle reminders lull you back to the waking world.
Dude, I think this is one of those rare times I’m HYPED for a human in Equestria fanfictions! I have to say, I haven’t seen this concept before. I’m not sure if this is one of the first or one out of a bajillion, but I’m still very interested nonetheless by the characters and the story so far. I can’t wait to read the rest after I’m off of work!
God be with ya, dude!
Music is truly a universal language. Touching hearts across dimensions.
Dizzy would be cackling at these three
I like how music is being translate into wording here. Sadly, I caught up, because the Next button is broken, not appearing.
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I know right. They should get that button fixed asap.
But seriously this is an awesome story so far. I am loving every single second of it!!!!
When I read Feinstein‘s dialogue I can hear his voice being the exact same as Augustus Sinclair from Bioshock 2.
This is swiftly becoming the story I look forward to the most. Every chapter notification gets me excited, every new exploration of the soul through music leaves me in melancholic joy.
Was not expecting Feinstein to be so slippery ^_^
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I'm slowly getting to all these messages and I hope you enjoy future chapters :)
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Thank you for taking the time to respond!
I've always been a very intimate lover of music and have studied different genres of it over the years. I'm hoping I can remain faithful to writing musical experiences in future chapters and thank you for taking the time to reach out regarding it!
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Thank you!
I'm normally pretty selective when writing HIE stories but recently fell in love with multiple venues of introducing humanity to the world of Equestria be it through music, romance, the arts, or adventure.
Hope you enjoy future chapters as much as you have enjoyed them so far!
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The next button is fixed!
For now ha ha
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Not who I initially thought for his voice but this actually fits very well!
Thank you, now its stuck in my head when writing his dialogue ha ha!
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Nopony expects the changeling inquisition!
All jest aside I'm glad I've been able to portray him as such. I love all the characters I'm bringing into this narrative but Feinstein has a special place in my heart.
I wonder if the other Princesses or even Chrysalis will appear. Also Tirek, will he appear too?
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Stay Tuned to find out!
Probably not Tirek though. I hadn't thought of that. Hmmmmm
This, this is gonna be GOOD!
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You know, I would not be surprised if you put Chrysalis as Feinstein's boss. Given how ruthless he showed himself to be, Chrysalis must have trained him well.
It occurred to me that Feinstein picked a Jewish name, which actually puts him aligned with the most diverse ethnicity on Earth.
Weird presentation about him being 'white' aside, he picked the most broad ethnic group in the world.
There are Jews from a long stay in Europe, Asia, Africa, and everywhere else.
Historical circumstances, a lot of history, will inform as to how they spread so far and wide, yet remained Jewish.
How much melanin a Jew has in their skin depends on what part of the world their specific family spent time in.
11 chapter already? Oh my how does time fly. And I find myself falling in love with this story all over again with every new chapter.
I can’t wait for chapter 12. But lease do take the time need to make it great. Don’t want to have be rushed and sloppy after all.
WOW, I felt that! Music truly is magical!
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Oh you bet he is!
Marcus be scorin' out here!
How dare you dangle such a juicy chapter in front of me! (Why isn't there a pouting pony emoji?)