Rainbow Dash is a very self-assured pony and she has every right to be. But as she struggles to accomplish a variant of her trademark Sonic Rainboom, Dash begins to lose faith in herself. Can a friend help her find the answer? Also, what's with that purple laughing streak over the Everfree?
A/N: Dedicated to those who suffering Writer's Block. Some comedic elements, but not enough to warrant the tag I think. Image courtesy of Skyrings of DeviantArt
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'sup guys.
This was mostly an attempt to try and cram a story in as few words as possible. My style tends to be extremely wordy, so let me know how it turned out, what ya liked and what ya hated. Tell me why I suck
and what not.
ONWARD!
Bwahaha! Very nice!
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Luna wore a mischievous grin as she worked through her stack of pancakes, “True, dear sister, but sometimes our ponies need that little extra push, do they not? Besides, it’s not like I peak all the time.
I think you meant peek . Plus, you missed a Quotation mark at the end. ("). Other than that, think it's gold, unless there were other grammatical errors I missed.