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JBukharin


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I'll probably upload the third chapter soon. I have a few more in the snippet archive in QQ, so you can be all sure that we are going to broach the original story's eight chapter length in less than two years.

I thought you died with that silly hammer on your head in Spacebattles, good to see you're still alive!

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Nah, I am in multiple places and SB was a minor area for me to operate.

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Will there be updates in the future on Clearly (not) a King or any of the Equestria at War stories? It was one of the things I read the most in your profile tbh.

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Yes for The Blue Paradigm and The Man in Ponyland (and this one), not for the rest.

Was wondering how long it would take this to be uploaded here

Huh, started reading Fatherhood is Magic a little bit ago and now here you are. Well, that just means there are more good stories for me to read!

Comment posted by ThunderBasilisk deleted February 21st

Chaos magic is a perfect match for a human. Can't wait to see what he does with it

Fantastic chapter as always. Kek wonder what the reaction to these Changelings will be once they are noticed in the future?

I feel bad for my boy getting cucked I could never bring my self to read that stuff it makes me sad for some reason

Bros going to become kings of the forest some how lol.

This is still on my mind an hour later I’m still
Livid about how he got cucked man like FUCk

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Don't worry, there will be comeuppance. You should see what readers are saying about that in QQ. Let's just say that 'mending buttcrack' is one of the wanted spells to be used on Jeremy.

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Thank u my savior I now can rest peacefully tonight

Wait what, you appeared here again? Roar? The moment I saw in the description the John (the Bukharin) I immediately just scrolled back up. Gotta check fanfic again to see if this is also there. Good day.
Roar!

... Yeah, I guess I could see the kind of dickhead who would actively try and manufacture himself an alicorn waifu harem by cucking his brother, and god-like power for himself as like a 30 year old, being a child molester

You’ve painted a very concerning picture of the affairs in Canterlot. Hopefully our protag will be able to stay away from that, and keep those with him safe.

I need someone or something to put absolute hands on Jeremy.

Friend... I look forward to you continuing this story :3

Man I can't wait to see just how the dumbass is getting away with this. And just what's gonna happen that's finally gonna set John off.

Damn…..like does my boy Caleb even get a “lick back at all” or is this one of those story’s where there is NO happy ending just depressing stuff?? It would also feel so satisfying to make his brother suffer for making him suffer yk what I mean. And it would be just golden……yk what I got the perfect suffer for him….hear me out….what if we give him to the changelings and put a magical chastity on him so they only use two holes and have no other purpose….now that’s suffering for any “MALE” and just thinking about it makes me feel satisfied for coming up with it ……P.S. love all your work~

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He got Umbra as LI, his daughter, and tons of friends in Ponyville. There's a happy ending but the route to get there is harsh.

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That’s amazing yes just like every good story’s but I do hope his brother suffers I just love a good suffering …Jeremy not celeb

Honestly this dudes actions make absolutely no sense. Like what's the point? Unless Saddle Arabia had something important hidden.

Weird, this chapter didn't bring your story listing to the top of the site bookshelf I have it in when sorting by "recently updated"

Man, I don't know why I'm just now getting to this story. Peak retelling.

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God this dude just getting worse and worse. And he's smart to which is even more horrifying.

I'm intrigued by how things are going... I'll look forward to the next update.

Funny how two entities of chaos basically created bastion of harmony. But then again, when chaos becomes the new order then inevitably order becomes the new chaos.

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The ponies in this equestria seem to be in a situation where they say they are all about peace and harmony but in reality there is more of an argument for them being order. This might be because Celestia and Luna still have their parents and their parents nature overall. I do wonder if the elements would even work for the ponies in this setting. Perhaps Ocellus showing up was less an accident and more a guilding force as if harmony is as awake and aware in this story as some others then perhaps they have already decided to move on from the mane 6.
Seems like if space has spit out humans twice recently there would be some tear or breach in space and so if discord helps and our MC fiddels with it he could do quite a bit. If he wants to stay then he has the possiblity to connect to the internet through it and even grab things. Potentaly he could also secure it as a saftey thing as to stop it vomiting out others and perhaps as a weapon later to force the alicorn brother to go home

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Well, spatial rift would be interesting. As for forcing Jeremy back, before that I would love to see besides buttcrack mend, him being transformed back into human, probably into woman too, and make him as ugly outside as he is inside.

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dont forget that Celestia and Luna are likely not who we think they are in this either. From the authors notes the next chapter will give us a look at the elements but the real clarification we need is about why stuff happend up the top. I mean us being told luna cheated in the same bed as her husband is all well and good but we dont realy have context here yet, not saying her cheating is not bad enough but we kinda need to know what gone on to a degree with the royals. I mean sending the alicorn brother back home as a human alone would be devistating enough but imagine sending Celestia and her family if they are just as bad aswell

I wonder if John will transform himself into different creatures

GREAT Chapter... I'm intrigued by how this power struggle develops And especially the change in the princesses' thoughts/attitudes. What has Jeremy done to change them, especially Celestia, since it seems that she now repugnant Twilight
By the way... I hope Cadence is a good person and doesn't let herself be manipulated now that Shinning is hurt... Unless she has something to do with the attempted murder.

Glad too see that blue blood is not a spoiled brat but some one who wants to help people we don’t get that much from him

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Would be a good way to go about being the Chaos lord where you can walk a mile in others shoes. Perhaps even allow others to ask to be transformed in the future as its already been introduced that some races are imcompatible like alicorns with others.
Also with the context from this chapter the elements will likely work for the mane 6 but the problem is if that assassin who went after shining was from the royals then if asked the mane 6 would have to comply with orders to use them. Since you know twilights family is the only one who is safe and with Pinkie's and Applejack's familys owning farms they are likely gonna have to abandon them or sell them before they can flee otherwise they could be used as hostages.
After this chaper it defenetly feel like the other alicorns apart from cadence and twilight deserve to be depowerd or banished in human form to earth.

Good on Blueblood keeping Generosity away from those paranhas. And man when even Fluttershy has nothing nice to say about you.

This is getting better and better and especially the mystery in the princesses and how Jeremy influences them... I can't wait to see the next update.

Damn the rabbit hole just keep getting deeper and deeper. I can't wait to see how the Bat Ponies escape this. And good on Shining Armor on being properly paranoid

Sombra/Umbra mind control techniques at work here? Hmmm, actually we haven't really been told how he transformed into an alicorn, just that he has. Maybe he was transformed into something else that can shape shift like a changeling, although I'm not sure if changeling mind control is anywhere as good as his/whatever he's using...

Either way, I'm enjoying this to an extreme degree and can't wait for more!

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If anything i would more suspect that this was what john mentiond where you take in the magic around you when you are "born" into equestrias world. The only loose bit of alicorn magic that could be around would be Nightmare Moon. Could explain why he is acting corrupt as even if he was bad before arriving having adsorbed that would not be good for him

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I agree that is a little more likely, and we can't really draw any concrete conclusions, but none of the other humans have shown any signs of transformations regarding the magic they absorbed.
Caleb...?, Helena, and John didn't transform even though they also absorbed magic.
(I'm bad with names and he hasn't spoken on screen yet, forgive me father whose name I cannot remember)

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That is kinda why I suggested he could have adsorbed nightmare moon's leftover magic. As it would be something different from what the others likely adsorbed and also could explain the lack of anything else other the form he got from the transformation. Also could be why he seems to have gone out of his way to "obtain" Luna as she would be the only one who would be able to reasonably find out about his false alicorn status

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I do like where this line of thinking is going but some things do stand out to me. Like the fact that we don't know if the other humans appeared as a group or separately, if they appeared as a group it wouldn't make sense for him to be the only one to absorb some of Nightmare Moon's magic.
Plus, he seems to be going after every Alicorn regardless of their ability to prove him false or not. Probably in a bid to control Equastria through the use of the Alicorn's might.

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He is being shown to be not a great guy but I don't think he would be going after all alicorns if he did not have some sort of plan. Perhaps he does not have a talent as his magic might allow him to drain or grow stronger from other alicorns. Could explain why Luna began acting odd to the bat ponies if he was able to drain her and her her under some sort of sway. He does not seem like an idiot and that's the worse kind of guy like this where they have some brains but are still doing stuff like this

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I guess we'll just have to wait and see, I like to theorize but if I do it too much I get impatient for the reveal

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I agree. See you next chapter

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