Krypton was gone. Destroyed in a horrific cataclysm. Now they were some of the few Kryptonians that remained. And the last hope for their civilization. On their way to a potential colony world, their ship crashed on said planet. At least their precious cargo was safe.
Twilight's parents Nightlight and Velvet were happy to see their children growing up. Just when they thought their lives couldn't be any better, a metal pod lands in their backyard with an infant being inside. Of course they weren't going to abandon him, so they decided to raise him as their own son.
Comet loved his family and his new friends and would do anything to protect them. He helped his sister and her friends save Equestria thanks to his special powers. Comet's life changes when he hears something seemingly calling to him from the Crystal Empire. What's calling to him?
So comet is like superman right
Hmmmm. Pretty nice
Excellent chapter pal~
NOT ZOD!!! NOOOOOOO!!!
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Yeah. Or he will be
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Hehehehehehehehe!
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Thank you.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome pal. Can't wait for more.. but I will
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Okay what about the others will there be lex luthor end lois lane end the others you know the Villains end heroes l notice that in chapter 3 you put a super girl
A little quick, but I get the feeling anyone reading this is going to be familiar with the Superman mythos, so no reason to drag it out. Also, since she and her family are in Canterlot already, Comet being a known entity, and thus attracting attention only as an unusual sight, and not as an alien one, makes sense. Also, good on the Light family. The Kents would be proud to see that their boy still has the morals he would have learned from them. Now I'm imagining the two couples meeting, and it's an adorable image. Not that they'd have much to talk about, Nightlight and Twilight Velvet seem to be a bit better off than Kansas farmers.
Regardless, it reads well, and while quick, you're obviously wanting to accelerate past the prologue of which your audience would know, not a bad thing at all. You used a canon event to establish Ka-L's powers, morality, and showed others in power are aware of him, which is good and efficient. Mind, this does throw Spike ANOTHER big brother. Curious to see how that will go. That and Comet himself will be seeing how his powers work. Given Magic is common in Equestria, this place is actually like a world made of Kryptonite(while some would joke he's as vulnerable as anyone else to it, several comics state Kryptonians are uniquely weak to magical effects).
I am curious if Celestia can super charge our good boy here. After all, he's a living solar battery, and she's the living ponification of the sun itself. Better, its possible that control might let her depower evil Kryptonians that might appear as well. After all, if she can control the sun's rays, she might cast them into darkness, not only blinding them, but leaving them even weaker.
Good stuff, will read more later.
Huh, come to think of it.. wouldn't the main characters powers end up being different considering this is Celestia's sun their body wil be absorbing and not that of earth's sun?
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Just you wait and see. I have plans for Comet to have his own unique gallery of villains to fight, including his own arch-nemesis.
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A sound reading, but this is meant to be a group of Kryptonians on Equus, not just Earth.
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I plan to use that in a unique way, just you see.
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End love life right
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Huh?
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You know superman has lois lane they love each other he saves her from bad guys what about comet will he have something like that
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I just might do that
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I intended to grapple the duality thing through flashbacks. Lazy, I know, but it’s easy to do and effective if done right.
I chuckled at the Crystal Empire part of the description.
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Why?
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I just found it funny.
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Okay.
Sweet chapter, mate, keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter
Why did you make him biped and not a pony?
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Thank you
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What?
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A biped lifeform meaning a being who walks on two legs.