A humble family accepted their tragic fate as they died in a car accident. However, instead of standing in front of the gates of heaven, they were reincarnated in the bodies of alicorns. The family take advantage of this second chance at life by walking down the path of a fresh start.
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A/N: The family’s aura in this story will be inspired by The Mitchells from the movie The Mitchells vs. the Machines. This story is also inspired by A B-Grade Adventurer With a Bad Guy Face Becomes a Daddy to the Protagonist and His Childhood Friends, Let’s Buy the Land and Cultivate It in a Different World, and Easygoing Territory Defense by the Optimistic Lord.
Will contain some gore/violence, and strong language
Cover Art by - JetXPegasus
Interesting concept... I'll see this through
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Me gusta el concepto de la historia. Like
It's a unique premise, so I'll see where it goes.
Although I'm not sure what to think about it being a Lit-RPG yet. (lit-rpg is a genre common on sites such as royal road, in which the isekai protagonist is granted an "interface" that behaves like an rpg game, this generally comes with discrete stats, levelling, skills, and spells.) It's not a bad genre, but it's not common on fimfiction, and aspects of an interface can break immersion when used in a setting not optimised for it.
There are a few minor errors in there as well. Mostly a mixing of past with present tense. There's a usage of "me" where a first-person POV is undefined. And the part where the baby climbs the brother's back, as the sister cries, is semi-duplicated.
The concept of the story is interesting, I wonder if this will develop well or badly but regardless of that... I liked it. Like
Did the mom not transfer with them? Can’t wait to find out.
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No, she’s dead.
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they all get to go into heaven, but mom has like a secret past where she killed a bunch of people so she's playing ping pong with Satan😈🏓🤦
what
Hmm did the mom die at an earlier and is already there ahead of them, maybe they would have a surprise reunion later? Hmmmmm if.. a massive IF its along that angle perhaps it's one of the two white and blue alicorns? A possibility, perhaps. Cant wait to see what you do with this.
Is this similar to this story?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/565500/an-interesting-new-life
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I’ve honestly never heard of this story nor have I read it. And it depends on the concept.
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Basically a human male transforms into an alicorn filly in a world of Alicorns. The concept seems similar but unfortunately the author died before he could finish it. So that’s why I ask.
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Well, the only difference between that story and this one is that besides Celestia, Luna, Cadance, Twilight, and Flurry Heart, the family are in a normal world of MLP.
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Normal being the time of the show?
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Yeah.
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Oh boy I can’t wait to see how Celestia reacts and explains the alicorn family to her kingdom.
I love this so far
Well this blew up quite large and plenty of people are excited for more including me
I like this opening, keep it up!
Pink fuchsia? Isn't that redundant?
Well, there are several shades of that, i suppose.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/50-shades-of-fuchsia-color-names-hex-rgb-cmyk-codes--376754325089697811/
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He faked his death and made an alt account with a story farming his faked death. Was confirmed months ago by the mods (same IP and such).
Also AI story.
Like the others have said, interesting concept, dude! Looking forward to the next step in the family’s story. Oh, this is only one of a handful of stories where the first time around I’m hyped by just the first chapter alone! Coolio, and God be with ya, Author Shimmer!
"I think they're thinking what you think they're thinking!"
"If you're thinking what I think you're thinking that they're thinking, thenm I'm thinking that we shouldn't just be thinking. Uh... what do you think?"
Those who get that reference get a virtual cookie.
Perché non entrambi? (That's, uh, "Why not both?" in Italian.)
Looking forward to more!
Unique and a giod read so far. Curious how you continue the story
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Really, got any links? Not doubting, just sounds interesting to peruse.
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Some of the conversation is still here. Most of it was in the now deleted blog post where he made the fake announcement.
This is one of his alt accounts. The similar AI generated avatars were part what got me on the case back when it happened.
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I see, I don't know how I missed this, but somehow I manage to miss a lot of things on this site despite how long I've been on it. Thanks for the details.
Do you mean into?
I really like this, Ive never seen a whole family be isekaied. I know its just the first chapter but Im cant grasp the personalities too well.
This premise is pretty interesting and Im glad youre gonna change their names it helps immersion and its fun seeing what they come up with! Pony names are pretty interesting. Blah blah anyways looking forward to next chapter. Your grammar and spelling are good
I LOVE THIS!
Wait this is gonna be written as an rpg, interface mechanics,leveling up and all?
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Well it is based on manga and that's really popular in manga
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Yeah i know but is that gonna translate well to ponies? Is it going to replace the way magic is used in equestria? Is twilight sparkle and others gonna be using interface two? Its going to look silly looking and i dont how i feel about it.
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Well it really depends how the writer uses it, maybe it will let them do commands, maybe it will tell them what they should do, maybe it will be basically an encyclopedia, hell you could be creative and make it a physical object, that could be some fun uses. But there's a lot of ways to make it
Everything is just wonderful!
Write more!!!
but the system needs to be removed - it violates the created “sacrament” of the above-written story.
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Ehh maybe im just being a negative nance then, maybe the author can make it work. Hopefully i can get used to this "system",
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I could see it working if everyone has the “system” but only these four have an advanced version of it. Even if not maybe it will be flexible and they can use regular magic and the system is more of a training tool. Also curious what timeline they arrived in.
This is heating up!
I had a dream about reading something like this ages ago so I'm definitely hooked
Pinkie Pie already knew about them
Let's hear it for Yin and Yang.
Even more like an Isekai anime.
Nail: [speaking Namekian] Ah. It seems we must speak the Universal Language. English.
That's an oddly specific length of time.
Question will you do the mlp episodes or not
Great chapter!
I appreciate your decision to focus on the family for now, that way we can establish their personalities and how they interact with each other.
It seems as if the system is pushing them to interact further with the world, as the the new quest is so they can start to work with other ponies. And how will they react to a family of alicorns?
Ooh! This is looking to be a lot of fun! I'm looking forward to seeing what (if any) aspects each of the alicorns represent in contrast to each other and the canon ones! So far I think light/dark and creation/destruction (or maybe the seasons, but that seems underwhelming and this chapter did not follow that theory a lot with their powers lol)
Hoping to see more of it soon!
Well, this is interesting.