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Scorch234


I'm not as great of a writer like everybody else but I try the best I can when writing my stories so if you read my stories and have any tips on how I can better my writing I'll greatly appreciate it

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12109388
I never played frontiers so I don't know their skill sets but I believe I can try to add it in once I check their skill sets

12109570
Thank you! Frontier has this weird thing with stances the moves put them in after use but I think that can be left out. And its Gold fossil give it better moves though Hypno Tail can be replaced with Bladed Upper. It also has Solo Power

12110058
Np and okay also yeah not gonna do stances to complicated for me to understand

12110206
Thanks currently working on chapter two and a heads up the first few chapters will be in the past before jumping to the main mlp time line

This was awesome but it's a bit of a mess sentence wise. Shame he didnt make a Lythro but it is what it is. And nice that he's making a family though I give good odds of something bad happening to her.

12111012
Thanks for your opinion and yeah it is nice also you'll have to wait and see

If you end up with other characters that somehow have Dinaurian DNA, you could have your own Dino Squad.

I can't wait for crossovers to be open.

The race that Scorch is is called the dinaurian. The word you used was what it's based on.

12112106
That would be a great idea but velocity will be the only dinarian he creates but who knows maybe other dinarians will appear
12112117
Of course I'm guessing you would like to do one when the time comes
12112121
Dinarian is a alien dinosaur race from the first fossil fighters game

12112684
I was trying to show that you were misspelling it. It's Dinaurian not Dinarian.

12114300
I fixed my mistake thank you very much

I wonder if there will be any super evolved vivrosaurs.

Before this story, I only knew about Fossil Fighters from the Jaiden Animations video.

12118589
Cool I watched that video too but I knew of the game since the day it first came out

12119228
The next chapter almost done so you'll see it soon

Chapter was well worth the wait. And Ohh nice custom Vivosaur. And hope he doesn't use that item any time soon. Also love the partial manifest form you used here. Inspired by Frontier or Dinosaur King?

When we reach the main timeline, I wonder what will happen?
Such as with Spike?

12122206
As much as I hate it i took inspiration from frontier and thanks
12122291
You'll have to wait and see because after the fourth chapter we're going to the main mlp timeline in chapter 5

Poor Velocity. I hope she'll be okay and that Spark will be a good guy.

12122397
Don't worry Spark will still be good and as for Velocity, Scorch will do what he can as her father to comfort her

12177192
It's still in the works just been busy with a ton of irl stuff

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