If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.
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I'm surprised that Chrysalis isn't involved with this?
Otherwise, she would be very proud of this dark version of Thorax.
This is really good story. I love it.!!
I do have a few questions though
In the story will thorax and pharynx eventually transform into their new selves like in the show? Or will they stay their corrupted selves.
Will Thorax eventually become king of the changelings?
great chapter i did miss seeing your stories
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I have plans for Chryssi
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Spoilers~
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I missed writing them
nice work
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I'm happy your back hope you can do some of your old stories to😊
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maybe I will
Love the conversion through sex theme.
Ignoring the normal lower detail in later scenes to avoid being repetitive it's just a touch light on the detail on the nsfw scenes for my preference.
Only issue: They still feed on love, they have now converted an entire town into changelings who will now presumably starve in some period of time.
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I'm going with Converted Changelings survive on their own love for their Masters.
if they stopped using generations ago than I'm guessing there's a good reason why
probably some side effects or being temporary
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I actually have a lore reason already planned out, the problem is I dont know how to put it into the story without being tacked on
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I hope the release of the second chapter was a satisfying answer for ya!
Fun story so far, looking forward to see what you will come up with next. Best of luck.
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Thank you so much!
nice work
This is a really good story. And this chapter was awesome.
Also, I like the colours that you gave them. It does fit better for them more evil aesthetic.
I can’t wait for thorax to meet Spike. I feel like They would have fun together.
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Much fun
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I forgot to ask this earlier, but will ocellus. Be making an appearance in the story at some point.
You mentioned in this chapter that the new “enhanced” changelings don’t need to feed as much. How does that work exactly?
Do they still need to feed?
Do they simply feed on other things?
In my head, in the show when they transform into their new forms they can produce their own love thus not needing other ponies and creatures to give them love meaning they are their own source of food. Is that how it works in this story? Or is this a different type of Change?
And one more ( sorry I keep spamming you with questions)
What does pharynx look like? Same as he did in the show when he was reformed but pallet swapped?
And do the other change things also look like that New transform self swapped or do they still have the holes in their legs?
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They dont get as hungry, and they can be fueled by other emotions, most notably Lust, which is why theyre all so horny all the time now.
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Yes
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Both Pharynx and Thorax have their King bodies from post season 6, but they're pallet swapped yes. I would've included an example image for Pharynx in the Author's Note if I could have found one, but I just couldn't.
I wonder if the changelings have any hypnotic/mind altering abilities
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👀
...Now that's hot-
nice work
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I have a question: if common ponies get turned into different types of changelings, if an alicorn Princess got converted, would they turn into changeling queens?
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That is a very good question. I have yet to get that far in my planning, so for right now I can give you the answer of a solid Maybe/Probably.
It does make the most sense. At least to me.
Loved the chapter especially to what happened to the factory boss parts, it was a lot of fun. Your writing is improving a lot compared to the earlier chapters, but it's hard to guess what the various chapters looked like as ponies at time, making it difficult to imagine them. Keep it up dude.
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Yeah, I've always struggled with descriptions of ponies. I'm trying to do better. I also am taking this story much more seriously than others in my past. I even have Coverart for it commissioned. It's on its way. Can't WAIT to post it.
Do the new enhanced changelings have any sort of special ability’s? Aside from just being stronger and smarter.
Are they better at magic?
Do they have more Shapeshifting capabilities or forms to take?
Are there any sort of hypnotic abilities they can use on ponies?
Do they have different types of goop to throw or use on ponies?
Great chapter by the way, I am so in love with this story. Thank you so much for writing it.
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Thank you! I love writing this story.
And as for mind control. Most Changelings can by spitting concentrated love in the face of any creature that isnt a changeling. It puts them into at trance.
As for more traditional mind control abilities, I may implement that in the future.
As for shapeshifting abilities? They all have extremely powerful shapeshifting capabilities. They already did in the show, and now they're stronger than that.
As for different types of goop? I'll have to think on that. There's a lot of potential there.
nice work and when you can could you do a chapter for tymr and thr?
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I'm trying to focus on one story at time for now.
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i was only asking for incase you run in to a roadblock with this one because sometimes other user burn themselves out on the one story and some stop all together and some don't show up anymore that's all I'm saying
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I understand
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thanks
Are the changelings bisexual? Or pansexual?
It would make sense if they were Pan, given that they don’t care about which gender they fuck.
I was just wondering if they have a preference or our all changelings pan/bi.
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Pretty much every changeling is Pan
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It also depends on the changeling doing that "conversion" so an alicorn getting turned by merely a bunch of captains would have all that potential just wasted into a common eggbearer~
It might be a good solution for the brothers if they decide they don't want to deal with anymore queens after turning one alicorn.
That and bring the "raping a queen to reduce their mental capabilities" to its conclusion by going farther than they did with crysalis~
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Lol thats a good point.
I have been considering setting up it being hard for everyling but Thorax and Pharynx to convert an Alicorn. But the idea of a Goddess being reduced to an egg bearer is rather hot.
nice work
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This was a great chapter, I loved it!
I also love being able to see the changelings full hypnotic abilities, one that doesn’t just involve shooting love. I mean it makes sense that they can shape shift any part of their body including their eyes.
I wonder if that ability is just unique to the emperors or can every changeling do that?
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Haven't decided on that yet lol, but I'm glad you liked it.