After returning from the dragon lands with Twilight and Rarity, Spike then retreats to study and wonders if there's more he can do? However, the dimensional mirror makes the choice for him, as it tries to suck him into the mirror. Rarity tries (and fails) to save him, getting herself sucked into the mirror along with Spike. Together, they get sucked into Paris, get new bodies, and get framed for a crime they didn't commit. With help from Sly Cooper, they are taken in by the Cooper gang and learn how to be Master Thieves. Can Spike and Rarity get back to equestria and reclaim the Cooper family's most prized possession? The legendary Thievius Raccoonus.
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They’ve taken on anthro forms, right?
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Yep! Since in the Sly Cooper universe, all animals are antro, so it only makes sense that they would get antro body's as well.
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Also, in this story, Spike is sixteen, while Rarity is eighteen.
Oh
How old are they
I like your new story, I hope they meet the others
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Spike is sixteen (almost seventeen), and Rarity just turned eighteen.
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They well. Basically, this will be like, what if Spike and Rarity were in the Sly Cooper series.
This does look interesting...though I wonder how does Carmelita Fox shows up. Honestly at first glance, I was seeing Rarity as an assistant to Inspector Fox, but seeing Rarith as a thief to pair with her Spikey-Wikey and the Cooper gang is unexpected. I could see Rares as a cat burglar though...
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Yeah. honestly, with Rarity dress making skills helping her be a master of disguise, her elegance possibly giving her incredible acrobatic skills, and her charm making men melt with her sweet talk (I mean just look at Spike), not making Rarity a theif would be a crime.
Can't wait for more, but no rushing the story for me, just go at the pace you want. If I could suggest something, but when spike and Rarity eventually meet Clockwerk, they say something like "Owlowiscious!" And Clockwerk pauses for a few seconds as if knowing he was named Owlowiscious in another lifetime style.
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Hmmmm...I like it!
Good job with that chapter, it reminded me of Thomas and friends season 3's episode: escape.
Btw keep up the good work
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Thanks!
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Or maybe Clockwerk is Owlowiscious, leaving Rarity and Spike to decide whether or not to able to go home by saving Clockwerk and trying to bring back their Owlowiscious, or sticking with Cooper Gang by defeating Clockwerk and knows Owlowiscious is too far gone knowing that was probably Rarity and Spike only way back home.
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Well...I dont think that would work because I dont have a way to make Owl-licious seem to belongto the story. Though having Clock work the reason Spike and Rarity got to Sly's dimension is a good idea.
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okay i understand if the last one was too out there, it was because i justlove both series, and i might have went overboard and im sorry that i did that, but note it was out of love of both franchise and your story, and if i overstaied my welcome, im sorry about that, but i will still read your story because it was good
Huh, so that's how they met.
And I was wondering if they're anthro in Sly's world or not. If not, then how come they didn't question a pony that can talk and a dragon that's supposed to be a myth.
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Oh, in Sly's world there anthro.
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It's ok, some of your ideas were good. And I encourage you to speak out.
Hehehe, wonder what weapons they'll take up on. Maybe a pair of kama sickles for Rarity, and a dragon beard hook, a rope dart or Tekko-Kagi Claws for Spike.
Now I'm curious to see how they'll accomplish their thieving goals.
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You'll see.
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Thankfully I have a lay out for their arsenal.
Hey thanks for the mention, it means a lot to me, as I have billions of great ideas but poor execution of said billions of great ideas, and rarely I get to show my full potential, because of poor execution, if it wasn't for that negative I would practically fill a writings worth of like say every goosebumps books ever made full of stories on here
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BTW, the next chapter will have a time skip to the intro level to the first Sly Cooper game.
No problem. The hideout was a massive writers block for me, but you guys definitely helped!
Great chapter.
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Thanks!
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Very well then, surprise me.
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No problem!
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Cool
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Spike has fire and can traverse lava.
Rarity is mixed martial art and if going by EG, can produce a shield She can also help create disguises.
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Oh yeah, I forgot that eg Rarity was a martial artist.
I didn't know they could travel to the past this soon ps maybe you should get a proof reader since i did catch a few spelling errors like.
(you were missing the E of IntErpol)
(the plural of thief is thieves.)
And that is just three examples of the ones i could find.
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Oh.
Thanks for letting me know. Sometimes the auto correct gets jumpy.
At least Carmelita didn't go ballistic on her this time.
Nice job.
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Thanks! I wanted it to be more of a partnership rather then the basic cop and robber dynamic, since in the game, Carmelita was borderline obsessed with catching Sly that she basically ignored the other criminals in the other locations. Mugshot and the panda king come to mind.
Nice chapter
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Thanks!
Of course the ponies would have an even more rigid black and white morality than Carmelita does.
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Well, for now. It's mainly Shinning armor that feels like that
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really? Based off what was in the Chapter I can’t see Shining agreeing with Carmelita’s decision to side with Sly and and the others in the final battle going by his opinion in the chapter. Carm did it because she recognized that Clockwerk was the greater threat.
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Well, we'll see.
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Over the course of the games Carmelita’s morality softened and became less rigid. Hopefully the same will happen to Shining.
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Yeah, basically, shinning armor is the original Carmelita here.
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Really?
Maybe it's just me but having the rest of the main 7 watch through discord reminds me of Lucar's sweetie's dreamland story (which is not a bad thing just wondering if that is a coincidence or not)
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Yeah, but over time he'll change.
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Really? Wow, I didn't know.