Chapter 2
Twilight was now walking back to the hospital, after a good night's sleep, and a letter sent in the morning to her royal highness. Today was like any other day in Ponyville, the sun was shining, the skies were a vibrant blue, the clouds were distant, and the mountain that supported Canterlot stood with a sense of warmth over Ponyville, even though it was almost coated with the mountain's shadow on the Eastern side of town. The birds were chirping their lovely chirps, and the ponies were talking their lovely talks. It was simply a wondrous day in Ponyville, though days like these were anything but different to Twilight Sparkle and her friends.
"Good morning!" the purple unicorn smiled as she entered the hospital. Walking up to the receptionist who sat behind the desk, she paused, thinking of what to say. Eventually, she got a sentence out. "I'm here to see the creature that was very badly injured yesterday?"
"Okay. He's awake. Just down the left hall, room 14. Here is the key to the room." the unicorn receptionist levitated a key to Twilight, who took it into her own aura of magic.
Smiling, Twilight replied, "Thank you." she then walked down the left hall, and found room 14. She paused. 'It's okay, Twilight. Just calm down... Calm. Calm.' She repeated the word in her mind, until she felt ready to enter the room. Placing the key into the keyhole on the door, she turned it to the right. A click was heard, and she slowly opened the door.
Once the door was open, she stepped inside, to see the creature in a full-body cast, aside from his head. Its eyes were closed.
Twilight walked to the bed's side. "Good morning." she said quietly, sitting beside the damaged being.
In response, the creature opened its eyes, and turned its head towards her. It groaned, and moved its head back in place.
"Can you speak?" she asked, curious.
The creature didn't respond.
"I'll... take that as a no."
"If you haven't realized, horse," the creature spat harshly, its eyes now closed, "I AM IN NO CONDITION TO SPEAK!!!" it yelled. Loudly.
Now cowering behind the seat, Twilight whimpered. "S-sorry!"
The biped groaned in response.
A long silence ensued between the two of them.
"Um..." Twilight broke said silence. "A-are you okay..?" she poked her head out from behind the chair, looking at the biped.
"I. Cannot. Move." the creature sighed.
Twilight almost giggled. "Well, being in a full-body cast does that to ponies..." she sat back down in the chair as she said this.
The creature looked back at Twilight. "Have you come to torture me?"
'Torture him? Why would I...' Twilight thought, going wide-eyed. "Why would I do that?" she asked.
Chuckling turned into coughing as the creature responded. "I'm no longer able to defend myself. Someone has removed the Blades from me." he nodded his head to a small metal table, where two bloody blades with chains hanging off of them laid. He sounded quite angry...
"The doctor said you'd get tetanus if you had those chains on for long."
"That doctor must not know about Ares..." he spat. "The Blades have been on my flesh for years!" he growled as he raised his voice.
"C-can you p-please stop doing that?" Twilight's ears flopped down. She didn't like when he raised his voice. Not one bit.
"Doing what?"
"Y-yelling..."
"You're wasting my time, talking horse," he said. "ZEUS!" he yelled.
To the ceiling? "YOUR BLOOD WILL SOON BE ON MY HANDS! YOUR END IS NEAR!"
- - - -
Zeus chuckled. He stood around a circular pool of water that had a green, glowing image of Kratos and a purple unicorn on it with his Olympian brothers. "Kratos is no longer a threat to Olympia." he sounded as though he could never stop saying it.
Hades joined Zeus' laughter. "He has been banished from our land, and even better, the Blades of Athena are no longer in his grasp!"
"Morons," Hera sneered at the Gods.
"Says the one who gulps down wine and spends her time tending to the gardens all day long!" the messenger of the Gods, Hermes, smirked as he ran past her with lightning-quick speed.
Hera just rolled her eyes, taking yet another sip out of her golden, jewel-encrusted goblet.
"Thank you, Hera." Zeus nodded to the goddess.
Hera sighed. "It's not a problem. At least someone appreciates me." she chuckled.
Hades groaned, and walked off.
"What do we do about the seas?" Helios asked.
Sighing, Zeus responded. "I'm not certain there is one who is worthy of taking the place of Poseidon. His death will not be forgotten."
Helios nodded, leaning against a carved stone pillar. "Now what about Kratos? You're just going to leave him in that strange land?"
"For as long as I breathe."
- - - -
Kratos was starting to get a slight headache. This horse kept asking questions, like, "Are you okay?" and "What's your name?" and such.
He didn't respond to any of them.
"I heard you talk." Twilight pushed on.
"I do not want to answer any of your questions." Kratos growled. "I need to get u- AGH!" he tried standing up, but in turn, yelled in pain. "U-ugh..." he groaned, laying back down in defeat.
"You need to relax." Twilight said. "You're going to re-break your bones if you do that too much," she advised.
Kratos just groaned. "How long will I be incarcerated in this personal hell!?" he demanded.
"A couple of months..." Twilight said carefully.
Kratos' eye twitched.
"Maybe six... Or more..." she continued in a low tone.
Kratos was glaring daggers at her...
Nope, scratch that, glaring swords at her.
No, scratch that, too. Kratos was giving her the 'I will rip your legs off, and shove them down your throat, and use you as a bloody maul.' look. In other words-
"I-I-I gotta go." the unicorn said nervously. "H-hope you get better!" she stood up.
And bolted out of the door.
Kratos shook his head. 'What manor of trick is this...' he wondered. He groaned, and laid his head back down onto his pillow.
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Wonder how he will react when he meets Celestia and Luna.
DIS SOOOOOOOOO SEXY!!!!!
I love this.
Do AC 3 crossover now
1604853 Never played any of the Assassin's Creed games. Nope.
Eh.... The way you write some of this could be better.... buuutttttt, it's still good.
Ooooh... this looks promising. Before I read though, is there a possibility of... Gore in this story? I have a slight unhealthy obsession
1604885 Well... You'll have to read on when I post more chapters, so I'm not sure! And I'm the author!
God of War AND Ponies?
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Im in
1604891
Hah! Awesome, I see I'm not the only one using a "freestyle" method of plot creation... Also some prick gave you a thumbs down already --' Let me fix it for you by thumbing up
1604906 Thanks, I'll go find out who it is and beat the shit out of him- I mean, love and tolerate him to death.
1604901 Trust me, once I saw this got featured... Let's just say I have to remove a new coat of white paint from my walls.
Ohhh I love all the God of War games, this is the first Kratos crossover I've seen
I haven't started reading yet, but I'm hoping for some 'crazy pissed off, rude as shit, spartan.' To waltz in and cause a shitstorm in Equestria.
Also. Gore.
1604918
XD nice! Hmm. Tell me are you a fan of the Godzilla series also? Even if you arent I recommend you read My Little Destroyah. Plenty of gory fun. (mostly villains get whacked)
1604931 -_- I can shamelessly admit that I've never watched Godzilla.
1604926 Trust me, the winds of shit are starting to blow. It'll soon turn into a force-6 shit-i-cane.
1604935
Honestly I think that people just dont really get it much. They keep being reminded by the 70's and that was a real sh*t storm of crap. Oh I know! Watch this! AVGN does it good!
Ahaha! Glad to see this finally update, as it does have a lot of potiential. Here's hoping that Kratos, while calming down a bit with 7 months of recovery, hasn't been completely turned to squishyness.
1605080 Yeah, but he's becoming more of the 'strong but silent' type, in my eyes.
I was really curious about the concept (the whole Kratos in Equestria thing) but there's no effort being made to suspend the reader's disbelief. The gigantic 7 month timeskip which passes over all kinds of great character development opportunities is what finally broke my resolve and is making me pass on the story.
It seems the story is trying to survive on "rule of cool" at the expense of a cohesive, comprehensible story. You may want to fast-forward to the "cool parts" that you're thinking of in your mind, but without good connecting scenes it's just a collection of one-off setpieces that the reader has no connection to.
I suggest adding a comedy tag and working on keeping a consistent tense and either go with full-on 4th wall breakage or stop talking to the reader and having author notes in-chapter.
Sorry if this seems a little harsh. Like I said, I like the concept.
1605092 Criticism is criticism, but thanks.
i am scared of what happens when pinkie throws him a party.
but it would be funny to see him meet discord or chrysalis
1604822
Weeellll, considering that Kratos have that think of spark in his live to kill gods in his endless quest of revange, and since Celestia and Luna are considered godness in Equestria, I fell that sooner or later he will go on a small sun and moon gods hunt.
And considering that he managed to pass all armies and traps and powers what gods trown at him, Celestia and Luna are not even in they league.
SO I quess first he will tear apart 1000 of royal guards, than he will break Shinning Armor shield, than he will be banished to the moon only to escape from there with even more power, and than he will kill Celestia and Luna ( and leave Cadence alive ).
Ofcourse I m joking, there is no way somethink like this can happen in MLP fanfiction, but you get the picture.
I like it so far, but PLEASE don`t turn Kratos into a squishy fool. That would really jitter my critters
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EDIT:
Also, where was Celestia and Luna throughout the whole 7 months? You'd think that a 7 foot tall, inhumanly strong biped with chains seared into his flesh would warrant their attention.
not bad
1604853
Connor in Equestria?
moar
RE-WRITE
Give him all his stuff
Have him NOT near death
Have the blade's NOT come off
And no so many Time skip's
1608498 You wait. I have some ideas in mind. Just wait.
1605092 Hold on! I have an idea...
1606040 You wait! I have something planned... Kinda strange, though. That's the only hint I'll give!
1608498
I apologize, but those suggestions seem stale.
Sorry. I'm not rewriting this.
Kratos trying to fit into "normal" Equestria life?
Yeah this is going to be awesome.
Just giving up his weapons and armor like that, :L
1628787 You better hang on, because this rollercoaster is only beginning to go up the incline...
dam it twiligth now you have snared not 1 but 2 spartans
The Blades of Ares and the Blades of Athena are not the same. The chains magically attach to the same area where the old ones were seared in, forming the scars on his arms. Just a minor error to point out.
Okay fellow brony, kratos never says hell in the games, only the underworld, hades palace, and tartaus.
kratos in equestria........seems legit
COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING
you little devils, writer and kratos
2436638 when the author referred to the past gods that Kratos had slew, he probably meant for those he killed in the first two games like Ares and Athena.
Fun Fact:
Kratos’ skin is not naturally white. It’s just been stained by the ashes of his wife and daughter.