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Call me Bonnie! Sunset x Twilight truther, Rarijack enjoyer. All arts drawn here are made by me! Follow me on tumblr or whatever!

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They promised Equestria a golden age.

The inheritors of night and day, alicorns of sun and stars, were going to rule together, inherit the throne from Celestia and Luna. All were expecting them. They loved each other, and wanted nothing but to do this together for a thousand years.

Except...

Princess Sunset Shimmer has died. Her wife, Princess Twilight Sparkle, won't let her go.
This is the beginning of their new age.


Entry for the Toxic Yuri contest! And it's part of an ongoing multiversal story of mine. This is an infection au-inspired one-shot! Arts by me!

Category: Doomed Yuri/Toxic Yuri.

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Comments ( 29 )

Princess Sunset Shimmer has died. Her wife, Princess Twilight Sparkle, won't let her go.
This is the beginning of their new age.

So, Sunset Shimmer gets Duncan Idaho'd?

Zombie revolution, bitches. Let's go girls.

“Sunset, it’s me…!” I don’t know what’s happening to me. I don’t know what happened to me. Why am I so hungry?

So Twilight turned her into an undead.

Where’s Celestia?

Hmmm.

Her grave is in the Canterlot Palace gardens.

... Yeah that's expected but still surprising.

“She would be incredibly happy to know I didn’t let death claim her.” My love doesn’t hesitate. She’s sure of herself. She believes in me.

Mmm...

And together we watched in horror as my first victim stood up again.

Dead.

Just like me.

Mmmmm... Yeah I wish Sunset could talk, it would make this easier.

This isn’t what Twilight would want. So I couldn’t let it happen.

...

I didn’t mean to bite him.

...

"N-NO! No, I can’t, I can’t, Sunset!” She pulls away from me, she can barely breathe, her tears are choking her. “I can’t lose you again!”

Damn it.

“Sunset…” My love cradles me. She begs me. “...I want you to bite me.”

And this is the part where I would run away to the nearest volcano, and jump in it, leaving 0 hope of reviving me.

And I’d do anything for you. I love you, and I promised you a golden age. I promised you I’d always be with you. I promised I would do anything for you.

... :facehoof:


This is a pretty twisted take on a 'happy ending', because Twilight and Sunset are quite happy. But they're dragging their world down with them, heh. It's above and beyond doomed yuri. Toxic sludge yuri.

Well it's some kind of happy ending, and that's all that matters to me.

There's certainly a few comments to be made about how Twilight was in denial the whole time and only made things worse, and how her wife is basically an incredibly dangerous disgusting dog she insists 'won't bite' lmao.

"My dog doesn't bite."

The dog:


Good story.

Comment posted by lynne deleted January 25th

YAHOOO YIPPIE YAYYY!! YUMMY YUMMY TOXIC YURI

This gave me shivers. In the best way possible.

This is horrifying but I'm more of an advocate on spreading that AN joke at the end there. Pft... yurieka sound so darn cheesy and dad joke-y. Makes me wonder if Twiling is supposed to have the metaphorical pants in the relationship, she does have smarty pants after all.
Roar!

RAHHHH AMAZING YET ASGDSGS GFVV DGVVG CGVBDVFFXGFV AGAIN

Damn, and I had just gotten done reading a SciSet story too. This was hardcore. :ajsmug:

bro is she good

This has to end. I point at my own head, I beg her to end it. I take her horn again, and beg for her to finish it.

Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!! Why do you hurt me like this. It's so damn goooooood

And the reward for the most convenient contest timing goes to....


But seriously, I really enjoyed this one getting fully fleshed out (que rimshot). Normally I stay very far away from zombies stories, something about a world being forever changed for the worse with no hope of reclaiming usually gets me no matter how fictional it is. But in a weird way I loved this one. Mostly because A: I can read it with the context of your shimmerverse, so it being the end of "this world" doesnt leave a bad taste in my mouth like it usually would and B: it's less about "lets try and fix this... oh no it got worse" instead it feels more like "it's gonna happen, this is how everyone is responding to it".


"Queen Ember!, the dragons have begun to be infected, somehow a pony was able to bite through our scales!"

"How many victims?"

"Just one, Garble"

"And the symptoms?"

"He shows signs of constant aggression, general disregaurd for life, and lowered intelligence"

"Aaaand... how exactly is that different?"

"He stopped writing poetry when he thinks nodragon is looking"

"Ah, call the alarms and prepare quarantine then"

Man, I did not expect a Zombie Sunset sidestory.

I've seen your work floating around the site and been meaning to read some for awhile, so seeing this in the feature box was a delightful surprise!

Overall, a premium, top cut serving of toxic yuri and I loved every second of it! Actually a really sweet dynamic between Twilight and Sunset—if you ignore the extremely messy ramifications and possible implication of Sunset not being in her right mind—that I wasn't expecting from a story in this contest

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Well it would
If only this werent a fucking scam

Me when Sunset is doomed by the narrative (this is inevitable in all but a few iterations of reality)

Putting "romance" back in "necromancer", I see! :twistnerd:

Gorgeously gruesome!

Ri2

So, how are they going to feed everyone?

Oh Twiggles, making a world of zambee...

top feature , not bad

The lack of communication was bizarre. It's like this Equestria never had any mute ponies before.

It is worth stating that you cant grow flesh like fruit.

Well not with that attitude you certainly can't! I bet ponies said the same about raising the dead, but Twilight didn't let a lack of imagination stop her that time!

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I think that they're carnivores now. Yes they can eat normal meat like cows and deer, foxes and the like, but they'd prefer pony. They'd probably set up a meat industry once all the fresh meat's out

Finally, a fic that explores my greatest fear: "What if horses were carnivores?"

You really put the romance in necromancy with this one, Dapper, it was all just so tragic. Burning the entire world down for your zombie lover is peak toxic yuri.

i have no words. /positive this was THAT well written

oh this. this was phenomenal

incredible work, genuinely so gripping and heart wrenching... beautiful

disgusting. I love it

Reminds me a bit of Twice Dead King

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