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Undome Tinwe


The mind is its own place, and in itself can make a heaven of hell, a hell of heaven.

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Cozy Glow confronts Flurry Heart in the forbidden archives, where dark desires lead to darker consequences.


An entry into the (Un)Happy New Yuri Contest, under the category of Unrequited Yuri and Toxic Yuri. The secret phrase is "Pet the Koi".

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Cozy playing psychological chess again and made Flurry a servant. Rofl

Ooh, I love the foreshadowing with Grogar's books each only having half the spell, especially since between that and the actual phrasing of Cozy's final word to Flurry she does give her all the information she needs to figure out what would actually happen... if only she had spent the time to actually think it through. That kind of very specifically-worded trickery feels very Cozy.

Best of luck with the contest, fellow contestant!

And checkmate!
Cozy you scary.

This was good.
This Cozy felt appropriately "Cozy", and there were sufficient setups to allude to the ultimate outcome.
Appropriately dark and toxic for the contest, too, I'd say.
Very good, indeed.

I didn't see that plot twist coming, well done

forget about toxic, this is noxious yuri. Delicious

“It’s a good trait to have when you've got a teacher who'd entomb us both in stone for what we truly are."

I took this to mean that Luster Dawn is a disguised Chrysalis, but now I'm doubting it. Does she just mean what she truly is is evil?

Great story! But just to let you know:

Flurry shit the book with a loud thud.

You might want to fix that one.

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