This story is a sequel to Chromatic Aberration
Nearly half a year after the Fall Formal, things are looking up for Sunset. She doesn't feel as lonely, the CHS student body doesn't hate her (as much), and she's finally getting along with her friends.
But tension stirs beneath the surface. Thankfully for Sunset, it's not between her and them, but among the girls themselves. When they all start confiding in Sunset instead of each other, she worries this might spell bad news for the whole group. But what can she do about it?
Edited by EileenSaysHi and NudistSquid
This story takes place some time before the events of the second Equestria Girls movie Rainbow Rocks. This also takes place after the events of Chromatic Aberration, and while this will probably make sense without reading the prequel, there are some details and bits of continuity you'll miss out on if you don't read the previous story.
Oh Sunset. You silly pony.
I think I know who those two are boys but I forgot their names. I think the one with the bowl cut was named wizz kid, but I can't remember the other ones name.
Sure explains why she was hanging out of the window upside down.
Heh. I finished Chromatic Aberration this morning.
Nice.
Oh no... Oh noooooooo...
Somepony's gonna pass Kentucky on the left hand side, if you know what I mean.
She would make some out of sunscreen which were just absolutely gross imo.
So much for asking her to join but to not do anything except watch.
Uh huh...
I think she's referring to the battle of the bands seeing it takes place after this story.
She's not wrong, kinda gives me a new perspective for their hangout.
I hope she keep her promise.
Sometimes I'll never understand how Pinkie works, but knowing she's trying to spend time and bond with Sunset is what matters.
I'm not even gonna wonder why she ate the paper cup.
Yep.
Not again...
Oh no! Hahahaha, Sunset 😂
Bueno... Eso paso.👀
Aww hell yeah Scitwi mention on the prologue no less
PINKIE THIS ISN'T WEED
I appreciate the silly and whimsy of talking to pinkie at any given moment. it's entertaining enough.
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I just couldn't help myself! Glad you noticed, figured you would
Absolutely loving this so far. You really captured both characters so intensely well, Pinkie especially!! I can't wait to see more about this chapter in Sunsets life!!
Cupcakes for Treehugger. Opps.
WE'RE SO BACK
I had forgotten what a complete joy your stuff is to read <3
Ok I am... V emotional tonight about unrelated things and I am going to.. restrain myself from gushing too much but.
when I think of Sunset Shimmer, I think of the version that you write. When I am watching the various specials and shows .... This is the one I see. And it makes me fall in love with her all over again.
jsjsbdbdb apologies if im being overly sentimental or sappy I just. Bleuuagshdhdhc horse woman
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This is one of my absolute most favorite things to hear, thank you so much
Really Dash, I mean, really?
It's a good thing that wish Rarity had would eventually come true.
No arguing there.
That last part is something not even I saw coming in the slightest.
Which would sadly become a recurring thing til after the BOTB.
her hands deftly.*
I really liked how you're acknowledging the set-up of conflict between the Rainbooms and adding layers to that.
Also, I appreciate the callback to the prequel of a certain plot point while acknowledging people can make the wrong call.
Rarity gets flashbanged by Sunsets boobs lol. Very nice. I can see nudstsquid's influences here heh.
I find it very funny how Sunset is consistently annoyed at people bringing up her past actions. Like girl it was this year. You turned into a raging she-demon this year. You're not out of the woods yet, you did the crime, you'll pay the time, and there are a few hundred 'none takens' still to come, lol. I don't fault any of the rainbooms for bringing it up, and any outburst Sunset has seems pretty accurate to her mental state as well.
Also her wearing a bra all wrong seems pretty damn accurate to a pony being faced with annoying ass pieces of clothing, fr. Accurate!!
So, did Rarity actually explain to Sunset how to properly pick out a fitted bra so she doesn't keep torturing herself? Seems like a simple thing to mention that would go a long way.
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She did! Just off-screen (or off-page) so to speak.
You know it's going to be a good fic when it opens with Pinkie feeding Sunset a weed cupcake. Between this and the forever weed brownie she sure has a habit of getting her friends unexpectedly high.
i know sciset is truth, but this chapter made me put on my pieset goggles x3
Goddamn space cakes.
Congrats Sunny! You just spotted your wife! Now go mak on her!
Hi there, I hope all is well and I was just wondering when the next chapter of this story will be released.
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Soonish! I had several major life events happen in a row some months ago which has thrown me off considerably, but things look to be clearing up soon. Thanks for asking!