Vesper has been the Prince of a peaceful country for 500 years. Unfortunately, after an attack, he is teleported away, to an unknown land, where an evil 1000 years in waiting is about to re-emerge. First though, Vesper has to get out of Rarity's boutique. Fortunately, he's alone, but also unfortunately, he's alone! What will he make of this strange, colorful world? Also, how will his involvement affect the timeline of the show?
Death tag is for implied/off screen, and Violence means Violence. There will be some blood, but no gore. I like to make a very loose outline for my stories because I let my characters be themselves. It's for that very reason that romance in the future is possible, but also not.
No beta we die like Celestia's sanity.
Thanks for reading my little hobby! :)
Interesting
Okay, this has my attention. I am so looking forward to see where this is going. Keep up the great work.
This is an interesting story so far, why do I suspect that his true nature will be found out rather sooner than he would like
Missed opportunity to reference a famous short story in the title :p
What made you realize þat? Nobody said anyþing at þe last story
You had my interest, but now you have my attention.
Well, that disguise didn't last long. Did he straight up steal those scissors from Rarity?
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I just wrote him into a wall and couldn't figure out how to continue him. Once I'm better at writing I'll figure something out.
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Yes, yes he did. He lost em' too lol
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Well, she's probably not going to be too happy about that.
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Got it. But how does þat makes him a Mary Sue?
WHAT? I LIVE IN DUCKING CANADA AND WE HAVE NO SNOW HERE
"Chat I'm alive. I live in the south, but we got snow,"
Ha! So did I, and I live in Alabama. We get snow every 8 to 10 years!
Deep southerner myself, I was juuuuuust above the full blown snow, but got some flurries at least!
Yea, somehow Northern Europe is ridiculously warm this year. One can wear t-shirt in January.
Just finished reading! I'll definitely see where this goes...
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You’re lucky I don’t know þe lyrics of þe song
I wonder how much trouble he's going to be in. Rarity might make him sleep on the couch for taking and losing her scissors.
Keep up the great work! 😁
ok... the bit with the alicorn radiation being deadly to earth ponies. not a fan. it doesn't make any sense and breaks quite a few things. many of the on screen guards are earth ponies. twilight ascends to be an alicorn in a primarily earth pony town. in fact the of the three pony types that show up on screen in the show. whether intentional or not, earth ponies are the most numerous type of pony so having them being unable to be around an alicorn for more then a day without dying is a terrible choice for unique world lore.
other then that, liking it so far.
I can find meaningful reason for him to not tell Celestia about the truth.
Cool concept but kind of Falls flat on its face because earth Ponies already have magic inside of them that's why they're so good with the ground and Earth itself...
Confession time, haha
If that custom I think of, there should have been a coin included, otherwise gifting a blade is a "severance" gift, ending a bond or relationship.
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And Cakes are a mixed family of unicorn and earth Pony, with some Pegasus ancestors.
The union between three tribes would not be possible if that was the case, one faction being endangered by others?
Only possible solution that it is only Elder alicorn thing and they know how to shield others, in general
I can see Future Cosmo shipping Twidash to get himself out of the line of fire. Good, gooood!
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You know, I hadn't thought of that.
It's absolutely hilarious.
*Whips out planning doc with mischievous intent*