Spike's got it goin' on...

Lol wut? Why spike run off like that? Too nervous I guess? didnt know how to react? damn... compaq cracker or whoever the author is, can you plz get us chapter 2 now? I need moar.

edit: omg, you've already given us 5 chapters, forgive me sir, I guess i'm just used to being kept in suspense.

Ok pretty good so far, You got a ton of potential here, just a few things i feel mention worthy, Lot of nervious stuttering, some is understandable, but i feel it was done a bit to much, espicially by rarity. The usage of "said" is a bit heavy aswell, but thats a common thing that people do. Aaaaan those 2 are really the only problems i have with it. good show.

I'd be pissed if everyone forgot my birthday

1525427 They didn't so much forget as not get invitations. Probably figured with Twi out of town they were gonna celebrate on a different day.

humorou.ru/faces/face/happy-i-see-what-you-did-there-(clean).png I see where this is going

Spike reminds me of me when I was younger.

That's why I want to go into that fanfic and beat some experience into that little dragon!!!
God damn it!
Be thoughtful but not too much!
Be assertive but not too aggressive!
Play it cool but show some interest!
Be sensitive, but don't turn into whiny wimp!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZGoWtY_h4xo

Poor Spike. He doesn't need to dwell on his past mistakes. But he had grown more considerate and thoughtful. I think that's one of the things I like about our favorite dragon.

Was that his first kiss?!??!!

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Without a doubt. I say he earned it