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When Opaline gives Misty the task of putting Sunny under a love spell she wonders if she has actually caught feelings.

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Interesting.
Can’t wait to see how this unfolds 😃

Not my typical Misty ship, but a fun concept. Interested to see where this goes.

Yeeeeees.

As much as I dislike the Misty favouritism shown in G5, I always thought this ship has potential. Keep it up!

Interesting, and it has potential.

So far you have Opaline and Misty's personalities down pretty good.

There's alotta ways this could go; Sunny could eat the cookies and then see somepony else first, Misty could accidentally eat the cookies and fall in love with Sunny, or any number of things.

“MISTY I SWEAR TO CELESTIA STOP INTERRUPTING!”

Heh, funny that Opaline would use Celestia's name, considering how much Opaline hates her.

I could actually see something like this happening. Interesting to see how it progresses. So far everypony seems in-character. It could be a little more detailed, but since most of the episode remains unchanged, I guess there's no need to really re-hash most of it, since we, the readers, have already seen it (presumably).

Trotting down the busy streets of Maritime Bay Misty snuck like a spy trying to avoid any crowds and also trying to avoid suspicion. It was times like this she was very glad unity had returned otherwise seeing a unicorn sneaking around Maritime Bay would’ve probably started a riot.

It's spelled Maretime Bay. Mare, as in, pony pun. Also should be a comma between the words 'Bay' and 'Misty'. Otherwise it briefly sounds like the town's name is Maretime Bay Misty, rather than just Maretime Bay. :twilightblush:

I didn't realise it's going to be a rewrite of the sleepover episode. Looks like Misty does have a devious side to her after all. Let's see what happens once she's tricked Sunny into eating that cookie!

Until next time...

12082009
The rest of the chapters won't be rewrites of other episodes, just this one as it was mistys first time properly meeting the mane 5

12081852
Ah ill fix the spelling, thanks!

This was fun. Just different enough from the episode to be interesting. Reading on.

Another fun one. I think the most important part of this story is where it goes. I hope you've got a good plan. Interested in more.

Well, Pipp seems pleased. I wonder how the others will react?

Love the story. Am really enjoying it. Quick question, is Hitch part of the story or he doesn't exist. I would love to see him make an appearance. ( Maybe have him interact with Zipp some more.LOL!! ) Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter. Super excited.

12086486
Hitch will make an appearance in the next chapters!

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