Being the first in my "OC equestria" series Ross Pit shark hunter is a happy shark hunter who one day while out hunting sharks a storm hits and he goes to the magical pony world known as "equestria". Now i know what your thinking. Actually i don't because i can't read minds. But you will probably say this story was awful. Well it was supposed to be a random fic.
Yeaaah, looking back on this this was not a good move, please do not read this. Hell, down vote it right off the bat. Please!
Chapters (5)
Generally a terrible story.
Since I'm fairly certain that it's a Troll story I'm not gonna try to 'help' you get better.
Shit!!! I gotta step just my game in the next chapter
1462622 YOU POST THE SAME THING EVERYWHERE!
Although in this case, it is most certainly appropriate.
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i am ashamed
1462747 Hey, I'm sorry, but this story... it killed me a bit. Nothing against you, I'm sure you could write something better.
1462229 it's not a troll story. my youtube username was made to scare off trolls. if you people really hate it then post:
1462724 Naw, really?!
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but really i'm sorry you had to read this. i'll get better i promise!
1462784 Capitalize your I's and the first word of every sentence.
1462756 i'm sorry i will write better i promise.
1462790 i do. i'm to lazy to write it in the comments but i do.
1462804 Comments are just important as the story. I don't watch if you don't write correctly on EVERYTHING, and yes that includes your comments.
1462812 All right. All right. I'll write better.
1462837 Good... you'll improve with practice.
1462842 Kk.
Where's Evil Homer when you need him? This story needs the TWE stamp.
1462874 I am incredibly confused by you're ridiculous comment. What does it mean?
It means your story is a train wreck.
1462901 Alright well i hope you don't mind I took you're comment and put it in the next chapter. I used it as something I the Narrator, Tell Ross as an example of the story being a disaster.
1462901 Next time make sure to click reply.
Now i know what your thinking: How and why does Ross Pit... Shark hunter do the sonic rainboom? Or maybe: why is the sonic rainboom the color of his hair and not a rainbow? well to answer your question.... Shut up. I can do whatever i wan't with this story.
1478896 WHY WOULD YOU WHINE ABOUT ME POSTING THAT :(? Asshole.
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Alright i know that this is a late post to all you but uuum. What do you people wan't from me?!?! If you could give me some tips that would be nice! But until you give me an answer i'll just reply very selfish and assholl like like to all of you.
So starting wiiiith Coatlus. Alright you said what you said. And no. It's not a trollfic you stupid bastard. The hell is wrong with you?
Next we have art inspired and. What do you mean what the fuck is wrong with this? Don't you people see the random and comedy tag? Those are always the most dangerous combination.
OK now we got Regidar. Of course you think that!
Anyway now we have ShatteredIllusions. I still have no idea what your stupid comment means.
And now finally we got starforge... You dirty, stuckup, SHIT EATING, COCK SUCKING, BUTT FUCKING, CROTCH GRABBING, BALL LICKING, SEMIN DRINKING, DOG RAPING, NAZI LOVING, CHILD TOUCHING, COW HUMPING, PERVERTED, SPINELESS, HEARTLESS, MINDLESS, DICKLESS, TESTICAL CHOKING, URINE GARGLING, JERK OFFING, HORSE FACE, SHEEP FOLDLING, TOILET KISSING, SELF CENTERED, FESSES PUKING, DILDO SHOVING, SNOT SPITTING, KRAB GATHERING, BIG NOES, MONKEY SLAPPING, BASTARD SCREWING, BEES SHITTING, FART KNOCKING, SAP BUSTING, SPLOOGE TASTING, BARE BLOWING, HEAD SWALLOWING, BITCH SNATCHING, HAND JOBBING, DONKEY CORRESING, MUSIC SPEWING, ANAL PLUGGING, HOLE GRABBING, UNCIRCUMCISED, SEWR SIPPING, HOER MONGERING, PISS SWIMING, MIDGET MUNCHING, DOUCH BANG, HOE Binding, CARNIVOROUS, MAIL ORDER, PROSTATUTE-ASSHOLE!!!!!!! Sorry lost my mind there for a second.
1504334 You should honestly be ashamed of yourself. Not for writing such a terrible story, but by being so immature, it's unfathomable. That was totally uncalled for.
1522889 u mad bro?
I'm not mad, just a little dissapointed that people like you have mad their way into the brony community. There is nothing you could do to make me angry, because I'm probably the only brony out there that actually believes in love and tolerance. I respect your effort, but you should try better next time.
1522926 ...... Well excuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuse me princess!
Call me what you want, I can admit I'm a drama queen, and I'm only trying to help you. When someone says your story is bad, you should accept their opinion, and try to do better the next time you write. You should try and act a little more mature, also, because it only makes you look childish when you use over-excessive foul language. Treat people the way you would want to be treated.
Call me what you want, I can admit I'm a drama queen, and I'm only trying to help you. When someone says your story is bad, you should accept their opinion, and try to do better the next time you write. You should try and act a little more mature, also, because it only makes you look childish when you use over-excessive foul language. Treat people the way you would want to be treated.
Oh, I am sincerly sorry for thee double post, my internet wacked out on me when I posted it
1523319 I respect your opinion but. Something bothers me about what you said. You said I was being immature. That was the point!
Okay, if you were trolling, or pretending to be immature, I think you may have over-done it. Some of the things you said made my stomache churn
and it saddened me as well, because, again, love and tolerance 
1523376 oh btw check out my comment section on my story "My Little Haunted Mansion" people say it's the greatest thread ever. And it all started with a "user" named cricket.
That's how I ended up here. I honestly didn't bother with a thread like that. Anyway, I hope you took what I have said into consideration, and I hope you have a nice day
this entire chapter was just a total mindfuck. still confused over what just happened.
otherwise, good story, chum!
2012338 Trust me. This mindfuck crap is just. I'll only tell you this but. It comes back in a later story. But. I don't even think this is a good story and I'm the creator.
2012338 Wait. there are chapters in this story that aren't a total mindfuck?
This story was so bad it's goid
2710696 Yeah. It was pretty bad. I'm thinking of remaking it but not just yet.
it may not be the best thing ever but it caught my attention ... with some improving you could be a good author. Good luck on your future stories and keep improving.
The cover pic looks kinda like Hunter S Thompson.
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3871711 I created a Hunter S. Thomson look alike? By accident?
3872187 yes and I'm surprised you actually know who that is.
3873283 I've heard of him before.
3873494 ahh.
3873508 Though, I think I got the idea for him while thinking about Raoul Duke from Fear And Loathing In Las Vegas.
3873524 Who is Hunter S. Thompson. Raoul Duke was his alias.
3873558 I'm not followin.
3873571 Hunter S. Thompson was a journalist for Rolling Stones. He wrote Fear and Loathing about a trip that he went on to Las Vegas. That movie was based on a true story.