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During the meeting of the Crystal Empire family, the ponies and creatures journey into a new film adventure where they enter a world filled with dinosaurs.

The group join an Iguanodon named Aladar and his family as they journey across the desert towards the Nesting Grounds while avoiding the big bad Carnotaurs.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 41 )
Comment posted by DarthTate2009 deleted January 3rd

Looks like Flurry is having fun with Sparky

Where are Cosmos and Fizzlepop?

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Cosmos is relaxing at her home and Fizzlepop is most likely visiting her old friends, like she did in the comics.

Disney Dinosaur movie. I haven't see that movie for a long time.

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Since you’re writing the chapters for this story, do you have to watch the movie first?

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No, I put subtitles on the movie and pause the film so I can write down what character is saying what and what is happening after or during that sentence.

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And also if you need to know about them just go onto the Disney fandom and look at the Dinosaur characters

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I already know the characters. I still remember watching the film and listening to Tim Curry reading the story when I was young.

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I didn’t know Tim Curry read the story

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I didn’t either till last year.

Who is the protagonist and and antagonist of your stories?

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I can’t reveal the antagonist of the stories just yet.

Comment posted by DarthTate2009 deleted January 3rd

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Pretty good way to write retellings.

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I first saw the Disney's Dinosaur movie in 2000 Back then, I was 9 years old at the time.

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Let see how Twilight and her new student Sunny can handle this.

Cadence was originally a pegasus.

Sunny and her friends are living now in g4 Equestria? They're friends in g5 Equestria must be worried about them.

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Their world is actually connect to the one in G4. So all their friends and family are there, too. This is non-canon to the two generations.

Everyone was confused by what Pinkie have just said. But Twilight slowly started to understand it before saying, “Huh. I guess that makes sense. Especially from all the nostalgic comments we’ve gotten in some of the chapters, along with that comment with the Pepsi Man video!”

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That is a fourth wall break Twilight! LOL

You missed Lighting when Aladar introduce them.

Whenever you stopped writing and finished the chapter do you have to watch the rest of the movie and write a new chapter?

Comment posted by DarthTate2009 deleted January 7th

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So does that mean that chapter 3 is coming this week as well? Or is it this weekend?

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It’ll come out when I get to write it.

Hey Zini you should think twice before making a move towards a dragon who is in love with her Braveheart

Zini won’t try and make another move on Smolder throughout the movie won’t he because he better not

well a new friendship is forged. One that will go beyond prehistorical dimensions!

Is the equestrian group safe? Including Lightning, Smolder and Silverstream?

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Yeah. They clearly survived the shower and made it out of the river alive, the chapter said so.

Lighting and the others are okay. I had seen this tragic meteor scene many times in my life

Sorry Zini. Smolder are in love with Lighting.

Aladar watched her go before hearing a bellow of a Ferocious as it pushed Aladar out of its way, making him collapse to the ground.

Shouldn’t it say Pachyrhinosaurus?

Comment posted by DarthTate2009 deleted January 11th

“Yeah, apart from getting lost in a desert and no signs of a new home appearing,” said Rainbow.

“Rarity!” Twilight said crossly.

Is it Rarity or Rainbow?

Hey back off Kron! Don't you dare speak to Flurry like that!:twilightangry2:

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