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An entry for the Unhappy Yuri Contest.
Category: Doomed/Toxic Yuri
Pet the Koi.
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Oroboro
Just a gal writing about gals bein pals
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Oh damn.
I was expecting a tragedy from how things were building up, but that twist.. well, twisted it in an unexpected direction. And just, well. Damn.
Well, that was profoundly f**ked up. Twiggles, you have issues.
this sunset has people in it
Love this. It’s really good. Thanks!
Huh, so this is the second time Sunset felt what having your memories ripped out feels like
5:40 already?
Live with me if you want to come
I wonder how far could SciTwi plausibility get away with SunBot still running? Like what is her funding situation? Where could she even charge her? Guess SunBot also runs on magic power, but whatever
Also would her AI just go rouge if there's no way to have it permanently "calibrated" on the go?
with that title i was thinking this was megaman battle network related
also uh i hope this gets more content to give roboset a happy ending
This is why we stick to tulpas, Twilight.
But honestly, great job. The initial parts building up the robot really made me feel like she was being molded into a person (and later Sunset), in a way that felt natural and yet horrifying. And the last scene gave it a nice grounding in the greater setting, and put into perspective just how messed-up the situation is. A wonderful, entry, and good luck in the contest!
Ouch....that was....damn
Yeah this did not go in the direction I was expecting, that being the original Sunset was dead. Still great though, really lived up to the tragic yuri genre. As an aside, it's also very different from the tragic romance I wrote with a Sunset robot, haha.
That was some mightily toxic Yuri, I give it 9 Lycoris out of 10
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Honestly that's the angle I was originally planning on until I got like 3/4ths of the way through writing it and went "wait what if I made this worse"
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Amazing.
Yuri so toxic the resulting nuclear spill contaminated the oceans and sky, and rendered the earth uninhabitable.
Well done
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It worked.
Hot damn.
Concerned
Yikes. Sunset is remarkably calm considering everything.
Good story, I'd love to see a follow up.
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If you're setting out to write a tragedy, you shouldn't stop asking this until you're at a loss for how.
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It's good to see you back Oro
Good lord, this story was so dark the LAPD would shoot it for driving a nice car
I love myself a bit of toxic yuri in the morning...
Yeah this feels like smth a desperate, unhinged twilight would do. Casual Sunset Shimmer Sexbot
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You know you got it bad when you don't need to turn into your demon form to cause problems
Oh, Twi is toxic. I hope that Sunset can get Sundial (what I've dubbed Robo-set) out of there. Shaving off personality in order to keep control is wrong on so many levels, and I love that you made Twilight this twisted!
Twilight can be a nightmare ex in fun, fresh new ways you can't even imagine!
A seed was planted and the long term tragedy of it all is delightful. I can only imagine how nuclear the reaction from Twilight would be if even the messed up sun-bot she built to unconditionally love her left just like the real one did.
very good! a sequel would be nice! HAHAHA where will she go!
