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Analytical Mind


Hello over there, I'm Analytical Mind and l'm newbie author, hoping to be able to gain a spotlight in this fandom

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thanks you in the precedent story is made more than 3 wish and say its a connected wish i didn't like that but you , you clairely say 3 wish.

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Well, I want things to be clear and exactly what it said, soo yeah, you're welcome.

I find the assistant plot very weak. Even of surviving how woild she not end up in jail and how would it be even worth it..Reva is cold but not cruel

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She wasn't intended to be much, just some character that start the whole thing.

I know I could develope it further, but the focus is on the world and the other important character

I just want to point out one tiny mistake I saw in the overview of the story.

This is not the end for her thought, as the circumstances surrounding her death are abnormal and were a mistake.

I think you mean 'though' there. Aside from that I don't see anything wrong. I'll keep an eye on this so I can read when you have more written.

I like the premise, but I usually let stories sit until they have at least ten chapters before I read them.

All I can say is.

——)”Nurse Medicia, I want you to bring her to the scanning table and keep watch in case something happens."

My expression was neutral and professional as I stated in a calculating tone, "The resource's delayed again, might need to inspect the distribution chain and production soon.“(——

My expression was neutral and professional as I stated in a calculating tone, "The resource's delayed again, might need to inspect the distribution chain and production soon.

An alternative for the distribution of materials? I'll consider it for now... Concern about possible sabotage due to multiple reports of missing materials and tools? Worrying, I'll need to coordinate this matter with internal security, " I continued inspecting

Okay wait a second what’s with the unnecessary return space?

my throat in preparation for a serious conversation with the being in front of me

with its head shaking in what I can guess to be disappointment,

I hummed for a few seconds as I lined up the questions in my mind,

in reassurance as it brought up its skeletal arms in a calming manner,

long as I was careful in using my magic and continuously train

it clapped its hands three times until it nodded and stated in a casual tone,

well this is definitely worth the spot I put the story in great story so far

Well that didn't take long, from feature box to banned within hours. Guess I'm not the only one that was suspicious about this story and it's author, curious how they joined the same day that the author of the story this is based on "died", the similar avatars and cover art are one thing, copying parts of the story description word for word leads me to believe more than the storyline was "resurrected".

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AI leftover, especially when generating text with AI, not just checking spelling.

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I don't know what I am allowed to share, but this a common problem apparently (People faking their death). This user had even more than two accounts as far as I understood it.

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Yah, got hit in the face with strong deja vu when I first saw the story.

In response, I nodded my head once again as I cleared my throat in preparation for sa erious conversation with the being in front of me, which was none other than the Death itself, "Yes, I know who you are, you are none other than the Death itself or based on your look, are the Grim Reaper, the same thing just in different mythology."

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I got this weird feeling like you when I found this story from featured box. The writing style is the same and everything was identical.

Also wait, did Eternal Star death was faked?

Edit: honestly I do find the concept of the story (the first one) a good idea, just what this person did is something that destroyed this concept entirely. Would be nice to see someone else try to do the same while not faking their death or smth

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Dunno truth be told, either faked death or their work was used as an "inspiration"

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i think this is true.

both accounts have been banned, 1 blog post from The Eternal Star has disappeared (deleted as of now) and if you check own bookshelf if you have saved, his story is gone (hidden from public)

you can check yourself.
i cannot confirm everything, but moderator has commented this situation

[edited in 5 minutes later]

honestly I do find the concept of the story (the first one) a good idea, just what this person did is something that destroyed this concept entirely. Would be nice to see someone else try to do the same while not faking their death or smth

would say the same

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Why someone would fake their death here? It does not make sense, especially when there is an identical clone of the same story appearing day after

Also honestly I could try working something out with this concept, but this time more originality xD. As far as I know I’m not account created 1 minute ago.

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Why someone would fake their death here?

Don't know. For me it's same question.

Also honestly I could try working something out with this concept, but this time more originality xD.

hmm. Every time, if i read chapter and something happening (either important or serious), thinking the worst things that can happen with the main character.

You can try, if you want. Would be happy to read.

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Why someone would fake their death here? It does not make sense, especially when there is an identical clone of the same story appearing day after

Because sadly, they're stupid and desperate for attention as well as incredibly disrespectful to the point where they don't care about anyone but themselves and clout.

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Most likely a younger person seeking only attention for their miserable life. Someone that definitely should seek professional help. Because this is not normal behavior. It’s truly sad the lengths some people will go just to get that few precious seconds of attention the think they deserve.

Oh, this seems like an interesting conce-- aaaaannnnnnnnnnnnndddd they're banned. What the fuck...?

E: Apparently, it necessary that I clarify my meaning. That was more of a generalized "what the fuck" pertaining to the entirety of the situation at large. I had already done the digging y'all are urging me to do before I wrote this comment in the first place

well can't wait for the nex... and they're banned, never mind then

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Check the users profile comments, but basically:
- Faked his death on another account
- Used this account to post basically the same story again and take advantage of the sympathy gathered
- Story most likely in chunks by AI. For example, just look at this piece of dialog from the prolog:

"Senior Supply Chain Manager Reva Koria, I have finished brewing your coffee just like what you ordered. Is it to your satisfaction or do I need to get a new one? And is there anything else you need me to do?"

Who talks like that? A machine, that's who.
- Had even more accounts and more stories like this setup. Even wrote a comment on one that he used it to don't get hated on his main for comments people might not like.

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I could try my best. I’m not the best writer out there buuut there are many things that can happen under inspiration on 3 am x)

When those kinds of male classmates approached me, they tried to use their oh-so-very ineffective silver tongue against my rational mind that told them to fuck off and just leave me alone. In instances they are a persistent and borderline unhealthy obsession, I'm not a defenseless woman as I would kick their balls to the hospital or slap their head to a wall.

Huh, I would of felt the pain from the words, but those who act like a fool to that degree shouldn't have spawn.

I then glanced up at her with bloodlust in my eyes as I said with a pained growl, "Fuck you, " And aimed the pistol quickly at her before firing three shots. Two bullets missed but one landed on her chest, she shouted in agony with her right hand and went to where she was hit, blood foaming from her mouth before she fell to the ground dead with her eyes and mouth wide open in pain.

At least ya got retribution before death. It's more efficient then your family trying to find em.

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