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Could be interesting... I'll wait it out .-.

If Roger ends up in Equestria, I hope William beats his killer to a pulp.

Good introduction for the story. Looks like it might be quite interesting.

Wonder if MLP existed in William's world? Will he know where he has wound up?

Hmmm I think I'm gonna like this story!

Another good story with good potential? Just excellent. I will wait for the continuation.

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Well you wont have to wait for long.

The start makes me don't like the mc, I never like weak character or scared type, but that's just a tiny thing.
I like the idea, and I will keep an eye on this one.
(Btw, just to clarify, the character personality will not be like that right? Scare of do anything to anyone and weak)

Is the story being funded as it releases or is it already fully funded? Sometimes these get cut off and the patron leaves and it makes me pretty sad

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The first 4 chapters are already done and will be released over the next few days. The patron has continued to support it and I will be doing another big drop of chapters soonish.

Is he actually gay or was he just saying it to get out of doing what he thought he'd have to do with Threes? Lol

I assume they're trying to rush the Canterlot invasion here. I wonder if he'll take part?

I'm also curious what William will wind up being good at, and if it'll get him out of the hive or not.

Ok, not hating, but definitely you should put any gay tag or warning in the history resume, I have no problem with that, but others could find that annoying, also, he's top or bottom?

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I don't think warnings for the existence of a gay character is really necessary. I like including very explicit mentions to the main character's sexuality early on so people don't feel like they get surprised by it. Anything naughtier then hand holding will be marked in the chapter itself though, regardless of the gender of the people doing the devil's handshake.

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woaH WOAH WOAH YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE HOOFHOLDING WITHOUT A WARNING

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Im sorry, but all i see from your comment is “Hurr Durr im homophobic Hurr”

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Last message I made in case any mod decided to intervene.
I'm not homophobic, in fact, I'm bi, I have 0 problem, 0 concerned, if you feel I'm being homophobic it's your problem I guess, don't makes this a discussion or something else, in fact I should don't make this comment, but because I don't want any problem I prefer to makes this, so, don't blame in seconds for a misunderstanding, you may read the first 2 letters and trigger immediately, if you read the comment I even question about the preference of the mc, if any mod wants to remove this be my guest, I have no intention in making a discussion because it's not about the history, have a nice day.

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I get where you are coming from but you cant coddle bigots. Besides, having a big "Warning! This fanfiction contains minorities!" is cringe as hell.

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More like "M/M" and that's all, but again, nothing against it, it's just I saw lot of histories get hate as hell because the mc being certain sexuality and never give any kind of signal, just suddenly happening, can trigger homophobics, but I feel like I'm not explain my self in the best way, I just gonna shut the hell up and don't comment about this again. :facehoof:

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I get what you mean. I just disagree with the premise. No shade at all my friend. I appreciate the comment regardless.

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Why do I feel like this stuff about beast minders is gonna involve humans...

Not gonna lie, this bit with him trying different things has been dragging on for too long now. We have two whole chapters where nothing really happens. He tries a thing, he fails, he goes back to square one, rinse, repeat, rinse, repeat, rinse, repeat.

Maybe you have something planned that ties everything together and makes all those dead-ends important, but I can't imagine how. If you don't, I really suggest wrapping it up before people start losing interest.

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I hate to burst your bubble but they already say, in this last chapter, that its over.

The bleak low point before the storm.

Seems that Discord has bestowed some chaos magic upon William... I wonder how it'll present itself during his tests... Or after he fails? My bet is that he fails, and does something insane with chaos magic while trying to not be sent to the recycler.

“No matter where I find myself the one constant in my life is bullies,” William muttered to himself. “It would almost be reassuring if it wasn't so depressing.”

Like any witless predator, running from them only encourages them. Didn’t you learn that when they killed you, William?

“I am good at conflict management. I am an empathetic person, and I am generally pretty good at de-escalating issues before they turn to violence,” William declared.

William, you might think you’re this person, but you have not demonstrated any of these qualities in either life. You have rolled over in the face of, fled from, or otherwise encouraged the behavior by refusing to deal with it. Problems don’t go away with these methods.

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the law of the jungle the only way to make the predators decide that you are not worth the effort of marrying is to fight, kick and bite doing everything necessary to survive and never show weakness to the predator.

I'd been meaning to check this out, the last few days! Yeah, a fun first chapter. Poor William can't catch a break, he went from an awful childhood to being coworkers with a murderous Blueblood. At least he's got another chance at life... Even if it probably won't start off much better...

At least he has a lot of time to learn and grow. It certainly looks like he'll need it...

'Recycling' used as punishment... Brr.
And damnit, William! You'd think after clocking that they were quite villainous, he would keep a low profile on not really being one of them. Humans would surely be prey too, after all...

I thought the egg would get crushed and it's kind of like a double or reincarnation situation to solidify his poor existence in life. But that's just me for now I'll wait and read.

Williaaam, stop letting the obvious supremacist authoritarian state get hints that you may be an alien!
At least they aren't taking it seriously... But yeah, deescalation isn't exactly what Chrysalis is after..
Also, i'd be more inclined to think she'd ask "what's a person?" rather than denying he is one...

Bugs bugs bugs!
Very excited
And glad the nurse didn't squish his egg. That would make for a very short reincarnation

Recycling is good for the environment! Not so good for the children, however

“So don't worry about me or really anybody for the rest of the day. Enjoy yourself okay? Maybe find a female to partner up with, or a male, it's not like I give a shit,” the bully dismissed.

Wow, that. Wow
That's somehow even worse then when he was being an asshole. My gods. Ow.


I am so tense.

Oh, please let this story keep going. I'm on the edge of my seat!

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