• Published 4th Dec 2024
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A Sheep In Wolf's Clothing - Jest



William was not always a changeling. At one point he was a man. A man with lofty ideals, and more to look forward to than being a conscript in his new queen's war.

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Thus concludes this batch of updates. More soon though! If you need more to read check out this blog over here I'm releasing about 30 updates this month and will keep track of them over there.

Why do I feel like this stuff about beast minders is gonna involve humans...

Not gonna lie, this bit with him trying different things has been dragging on for too long now. We have two whole chapters where nothing really happens. He tries a thing, he fails, he goes back to square one, rinse, repeat, rinse, repeat, rinse, repeat.

Maybe you have something planned that ties everything together and makes all those dead-ends important, but I can't imagine how. If you don't, I really suggest wrapping it up before people start losing interest.

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I hate to burst your bubble but they already say, in this last chapter, that its over.

The bleak low point before the storm.

Seems that Discord has bestowed some chaos magic upon William... I wonder how it'll present itself during his tests... Or after he fails? My bet is that he fails, and does something insane with chaos magic while trying to not be sent to the recycler.

“So don't worry about me or really anybody for the rest of the day. Enjoy yourself okay? Maybe find a female to partner up with, or a male, it's not like I give a shit,” the bully dismissed.

Wow, that. Wow
That's somehow even worse then when he was being an asshole. My gods. Ow.


I am so tense.

Oh, please let this story keep going. I'm on the edge of my seat!

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