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It looks quite good and I'm happy to see a RGRE that differs a bit from the other ones. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Fun beginning.
I hope you keep going strong!!
Interesting start, undeniably different writing style than I was. Though just because it's in a different direction, it wasn't a bad one nor does mine is even better, as I too have my own mistakes.
You got me hooked I admit, kind of a rarity
to see a RGRE story these days. Just one thing, on some part of the story I got confused between who is talking to who and is it a dialogue or a narrative?
Might want to keep eyes on those thing on later dates, willing and hoping to see how this would continue.
*In an RGRE World*
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I thought I was the only one confused about who was talking to who
the idea is good, but in short... confusing and rushed
(he is human or pony, there was never a description of him so it's difficult to know who he is, or what he is like, maybe it's just me but I kept wondering if he is human, pony or anthro since a transformation was never clarified... but again this is just the first chapter, maybe everything will be developed in the next ones).
You're doing great so far.
little confusing
but please for the love that is all good print out more chapters please 🙏 there's very few long RGRE category.
So far it comedy gold. Although I am bit confused in this world mares take over jobs or something here.
It's a lil rough but it's got potential keep it up 👍
A bit rough in some small typos, but otherwise great comedy. Keep tossing those mares out of your bar! Especially if they're not going to buy anything.
Spend some time to fix the grammar and spelling mistakes. Random capitalization everywhere throws me off a bit. Makes it look like it was written by a nine year old.
Needs some fixes here and there in the spelling sector, but other besides that, seems like it's going to be a fun story to keep up reading
Please do tell me he has a manly stache and his cutie mark is the silhouette of a pony being kicked out of a bar.
Keep up the good work and happy December!
Okey, let's see. Thanks for the chapter, btw!
NGL, the RGRE is reaaaalllly holding this one back. Random dude ends up as a bartender that don't give no hoots? Golden.
All the sexism, stupidity, and escapades that come with stories that lean way too hard into the humiliation fantasy?
Tarnished bronze.
Here's hoping we get no-nonsense bartender man being cool, and not endless "you man, man weak, be my sextoy."
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Very true lol the way I think how RGRE was going to get like would be this
To sum the video up is a comedian talking about the root of the problem of women and how they act and think. Also tells how men are. Just thinking how RGRE storied might be like that. The males are oopress, can't vote, always have the last word etc etc. the mares run the world, technology is invented by mares, mares go to war and make the bread to put on the table. Usually we get RGRE stories about sex, a pony gets sent into earth by some mishaps or something. Sorry I'm venting
you get the point. We just dont get a lot of stories about ACTUAL RGRE on equestria. There's very very few stories on that
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*shrug* RGRE, or "Reversed Sexual Morality" as it's sometimes called in non-mlp settings, usually has two purposes:
It's a fetish for male-oriented writers to indulge in being the helpless damsel or the extra big strong man impressing the ladies who think all guys are pushovers.
Or, it's a fetish for female-oriented writers to punish all men for the historical awfulness most women faced in our own history.
It can be an interesting tool to explore sexuality, gender roles, and the juxtaposition of both in wider historical contexts and through fiction....
... but it's usually just a sex thing, or a preachy thing, and almost always not worth the bother and gets in the way of the far more interesting story that's underneath it.
This story, for example, looks like it could be a real riot. A no-nonsense bartender that's not letting something as small as total body transformation, dimensional displacement, or an entirely new set of senses (Magic) get in the way of opening up on time and kicking the sexist pieces of trash to the curb.
See, now the obsessively heavy RGRE is going to make the (male? wtf?) Guard come down on Bar Keep, drag him in chains to Celestia so that he can be stripped of all rights, and then get humiliated, and then it's a sex thing, and then it's on oppression thing, and then he's back to 'owning' his bar that his 'wife' actually owns, and he's just a slave, yadda yadda not as interesting as that previous paragraph.
Mild - mild - RGRE elements can be an enjoyable touch of culture shock on top of all the rest. If Rainbow Dash had entered, been surprised at a male bartender, and then after some mild flirting asked "hey, don't usually see a stallion behind the counter. What's your story?" that could have been an excellent set up to jump to the next plot point. It could even end the same way, but with the barkeep getting increasingly annoyed with Dash's confusion, and his own no-nonsense attitude not helping and escalating into him kicking her out.
The potential in this story is pretty great. I think taking some 120 grit sandpaper to it for some rough polishing would get you something wonderful.
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Thanks,for actually giving this story a chance, not many people realize that some people just find the concept of RGRE interesting, I assure you it's not within any of those negative points, if you wish to find out more than stay tuned because, throughout my journey with this story I will try to make the grammar better. I will also try to make the story easier to understand.As you can see I am a novice when it comes to writing. Thanks and have a nice day, I will see you at 8:00 Est.
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I was never the biggest fan of RGRE because most authors write it to be extremely sexist.
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I look forward to where you take it ^_^
Like I said, the premise is solid. Can't wait to see the execution!
Damn, new chapter, and so quickly! Thank you!
I honestly can safely say, that might be common thing that might actually happen. Imagine being in his position living your life as bartender, basically claiming see and hear everything, even with slight difference he still go on his life like normal week day you display here. Quick question how strong is he in terms of combat like if he were to go against enemies of equestria right now, like will he train or no.
Twilight must be going bonkers…
Daring Do
Daring Dadla Didly Da Mother Fucking Do
A bit surprised that she would be the first actual customer, but I guess there's only so much thrill of adventure a mare can take eh?
Like before, a bit rough, but certainly enjoyable to read. Good work and looking forward to this
I really like sexist RGRE fics, if you put more effort into spellchecking this could be really promising!
The story itself is a fun to read!
The grammar problems make reading and understanding the story difficult.
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You're not wrong tbf, I seen a lot of them where it was just plain sexist, just be sexist.😭😭 but I also seen ones where it was actually quite all right, where it wasn't going to overboard with the sexism.
(But that's just my opinion people can like it or don't)
Its still good, and I like how its not going into the extreme side of RGRE where every character wanted to get into the MC's pants.
A bit rough with some typos and misspelling. I like the premise, however the MC is a bit too nonchalant about literally being teleported to another world.
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He's just a chill dude.
Great start! i really hope You continue this
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I wouldn't mind that outcome as long as it's well written. I think you can write a pretty good story of interesting encounters stemmed from that mindset being embedded into Equestria society.
The biggest problem I have is the "suddenly Alicorn" syndrome.
I wonder what will happens if celestia goes to that bar, looking forward for more!
Please copy-edit. It makes me feel like you don't respect your own story, to leave it like that.
Ooh this is nice, into my library you go!
This is so funny. I WANT MORE
Maybe find a dedicated editor? If not, grammarly isn’t really a substitute, but it’ll help a TON.
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Same here.
I like how you've written out this story to not be sexist or how it goes to the extreme where every female wants to get into a male's pants.
Keep up the good work.
Funny stuff :)
So far a pretty fun story! Can’t wait for the next one! ^^
I like the idea of this story, but you seriously need to find a prereader/beta. There are groups that can help with that and I highly encourage using them. Don't feel bad that we're recommending one, though (not saying you are, but I've seen writers react badly to being told they made mistakes). On the contrary, all professional writers have editors and prereaders for a reason. You'd just be joining such illustrious company.
Spelling and grammar errors aren't the end of the world, everyone makes those mistakes (I still have to clean them up in 10-20k word chapters all the time, even ones I wrote years ago), but there's so many in such a short space that it can and probably will at some point drive away readers who would otherwise be invested because it's such an easy thing to correct. I can overlook a few, but this many in only 2.5k words was pushing it.
Don't be so hasty to post that you neglect doing due diligence. Like others have said, the story needs a bit of polish, but it's got plenty of potential, and I would hate to see it go to waste.
keep it up author!
Yeah! New chapter!
The neighbor noticed that she has a neighbor.
I noticed that Daring didn’t mention how she demanded the strongest drink…
What’s Twilight been up to since she got royally spanked out our guy’s front door?
Interesting direction... I'll have to wait for more I suppose .-. (The grammar is definitely a bit better this time around!)
Celestia is going to get the wrong impression of Earth if she plays Dragon Ball Sparking ZERO, it's going to be hilarious.
Ok, that is total BS, and you know it!!!!!
Plus, our Bartender literally did try to warn you MANY times that his alcohol is strong.
That stealing b**th STOLE it!!!!
I don't blame him that once he realizes what happened, he wants to kick her ass, and BAN her from going to his bar!
How do they even know about Humanity? Is it somebody to do with mirror again?
Plus, you SHOULD give his game back or he'll kick your ass!!!!
Oh DON'T even think about it. You can't exactly forced him to be a father.
Even though it's clearly Daring's fault for that.
Their should be karma for lying and caused this unnecessary misunderstanding.
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How the heck would she even play it if she doesn't even have the PS5 console and controller, and speaking about controllers.
She has hooves, not hands?
And why and how would she play it anyways, when this was clearly STOLEN, "not borrowed"!?
Nothing wrong so far I'm enjoying this
Thanks for the update!