The Cold Wind Blows

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Once upon a time there was a ghost in the woods, and she was cold...

Sent by the Cutie Map to fix the problem, how can Rarity and Starlight hope to succeed against such a supernatural enemy?

Written for Alki for Jinglemas 2024

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alki

alki #1 · Dec 27th, 2024 · 2 · ·

Thanks for the great Jinglemas fic; I really liked it!
It was actually pretty suspenseful for a Hearth's Warming (or at least winter) story, and I found it really engaging. The ghost filly's story was so sympathetic, so I'm glad she got a warm family in the end.
The bit with Twilight at the end was also pretty funny. Starlight really is the main character, isn't she?

Frazzle2Dazzle

Frazzle2Dazzle #2 · Dec 27th, 2024 · 1 · ·

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I wanted to write something to show how good of a friend Rarity is, even without the others of the mane six there. Despite being Generosity, she’s a good bit kind and loyal as well.

And while I agree that Starlight stole the show, Rarity was right alongside to help move things along and keep Hearth’s Warming on track.

Glad you liked it!

Moosetasm