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I got one thing I do and I do it as best I can.

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Rainbow Dash's late afternoon errand run is almost spoiled by a particular orange filly who finds her mentor and idol to be the perfect sleeping spot after a long day.

Sure, Dash could put her to bed, but why waste an opportunity for some quality time?

Now if only her friends would stop noticing what she's doing.

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an interesting story, I must say

A really sweet story

Sweetness incarnate. I loved it!

I need your grilled cheese recipe

they say it gives fillies good dreams, but who really knows for sure?

yes. indeed. who could know?

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Stove times and similar may vary, but I recommend a sourdough loaf cut into normal slices, any slice of sharp white cheddar, and strawberry jam.

Do one slice of the cheddar, a generous but even film of jam.

Lather the outside of the slices with just normal mayo, give it an even coating, grill in a pan on medium heat, both sides, until the cheese is melted.

One of the cutest stories I've ever read! Would you ever consider doing a cute parental story with Twilight and Spike?

HEHEHHEHEHEHEHEJHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHHEEJHEHEHEEEEEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEEHEHHEHEHEHEHEEEEHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEEEEEE ELOVE

I loved the story, and the way things are going, I believe Scoots here is gonna let slip the 'M' word sometime soon. And you made me hungry for Grilled Cheese Sandwich:rainbowwild:

This is so cute
Keep doing great stories like this

Cute AF

This is a pretty good story...
or, it WAS.

Bread, book, bushel, report handed in. All set.

In this quote, Dash goes over her errand list: Bread, Book, Bushel, Report. All good, right?
NOPE!
The title of the chapter is "Book, Bushel, Bread, Bullies"! Bullies and Report is... well, the same thing, but the other 3 got swapped around for no reason! Not cool! And, to top it off, that's not even the correct order(Bushel, Book, Bread, Bullies)!
Now, let me tell you that there is ABSOLUTELY NO EXCUSE for not paying 9000% attention to the smallest possible detail; because of that, I have been forced- BEYOND MY WILL, might I add- to magically cast 3.6 billion downvotes.

(but in all seriousness, the fic was cute and a fun read.)

Imma read this later today. I'm working on my own Scootadopt fic and I can stea- I mean, take inspiration from this....lol

Thank you. Now I have to go visit the dentist for the cavities this story just gave me... :raritywink:

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I second that

Hey, congrats on the feature! It's well deserved!

Wonderful story. :heart:

ScootaDash is so fluffing CUUUUUTE! :rainbowkiss:

I thought that Scootaloo as an orphan fics were extinct since her parents appeared. All I have to say is... thanks, you sent me back to those lovely 2012-2015 stories when I was reading this kind of fanfics, I hope they make more.

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I've found that they're still quite common.

I was grinning like nobody's business the entire time I was reading this cuteness overload. I love parental Rainbow Dash stories, whether she's doing it knowingly or otherwise. There's just something extra adorable (and AWESOME!) about her taking the time to show Scootaloo how much she loves her, even if said filly is asleep the entire time.

Butter forever. To paraphrase John Pinette "I love the French and their reckless disregard for how bad butter is for you."

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My understanding as a fandom latecomer is that "The Last Crusade" is pretty controversial and that many fans prefer to fire it straight out of their headcanons into the sun.

Honestly, I can't blame them for doing so. The level of parental/adult neglect is disgusting, especially for a kid's show. I would have greatly preferred if it had shown that Scootaloo was already living with her aunts full-time or even if it had just indicated her parents were around, but hadn't made an in-show appearance because they simply weren't relevant to any given story.

This was moving. I don't like Rainbow Dash much, but this story makes me love her. It's well done. Have a like.

So so cute! Thanks for this lovely little story.

You’re safe now, my precious

I totally read that in Gollum's voice.

Loved this thanks for writing it! so cute cannon/10

Very nice story. I always enjoy stories of RAinbow caring for Scootaloo.

I love this story, it brings me back when I joined the fandom... It was the episode sleepless in ponyville that lit my fire for scootaloo and rainbow dash

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I'm kinda glad that it was confirmed that her parents were still alive in canon, even if they weren't exactly the best.

Scootaloo being an orphan is one of those things I've always felt worked better for fanfics than the actual show.

Soooo unbelievably cute! Ahhh! Every detail from Dash's insecurities to her friends' teasing to standing up to the clown brigade, all of it was so much fun to read. I definitely need to borrow the sleepy Scootaloo plot for my own Scootadopt story! Wonderful indeed.

Cute story.

Sweet Celestia that was adorable!

I can't help wondering who the hay is downvoting such a sweet story. I know it's only a few, but still...

Why in the wide, wide world of Equestria is it so damn CUTE?? The feels!! :heart:

Rainbow Dash rounded on them, grinning evilly. “Oh, you wanna talk kids now, do ya? Tell me, Hoops: How’s that custody battle going?”

Rainbow: "So... you have chosen death":rainbowdetermined2:

Recorded reading this for an audiobook version to come soon.

Ok, it's cute! I admit it!

Also some rather funny bits of worldbuilding in here.
:twilightsmile:

Oh, that is just adorable

Well done! I enjoy it thoroughly.

This is fucking adorable

There are never enough Scootaloo RD fics, praise Celestia!

AHH I LUV THIS SOOO MUCH!!!! <3

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