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Spike heard her say it. Twice. "Before I came here and learned the importance of friendship, Shining Armor was the only pony I accepted as a friend."
What did Twilight mean? What did it mean for Spike? And most importantly... what would happen when the baby dragon with hurt feelings finally confronted her about it?
Let us find out.
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This right here is what I believe truly shows what exactly is twilight's and spikes relationship is so indescribable yet you did this perfectly this right here is what their relationship is and I think it's something that the show chooses the path of the sister relationship at the end of mlp but through out the show both the motherly and friendly aspects are also shown as well you have done this absolutely perfect
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Thanks a lot for the heart-warming feedback! Twilight's motherly side was, indeed, what I intended to shown and deepen in this fanfic, and I'm glad other people agree with me when they say that this show should have exploited this kind of relationship more thoroughly.
This reminds my of my own story, Spike's Sorrow
One minor typo.
They may have spelled it 'Cristal' in French, but most English and American Writers spell it 'Crystal.'
It's a very good story.
Im sure you didn’t mean it like this but just a heads up a mistress is someone you cheat on ur wife with
I love it
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Yep, I remember reading your story and getting critically hit in the feels!
Indeed, I must have mistaken the English version for the French one. And thanks a lot for the feedback!
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You're right. It is now rectified, thank you.
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Thanks a lot!
Not gonna lie. I sheded a few tears reading this. This was definitely powerful. Great job buddy.
A very heartfelt story, thanks for sharing!
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And thank you for that very heartfelt feedback!
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Oh, really? Wow, that's moving me, and it won't be a lie either when I say that this was my intention to get to my readers' feelings with this story. Mission accomplished!
Daww yayyy honestly a bit overdramatized at the beginning but that’s what made it great:)
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You mean the argument between Spike & Twilight?
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Mistress can also be used as the female version of the word master. "Yes, mistress. I'll take care of it right away."
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Good to know, thanks.
I have mixed feelings about this story. It's a beautiful premise, and I love wholesome Spike/Twilight fics. The dialog was a little clunky at times, I noticed 1 or 2 spelling errors.
All that said I disagree with your specific interpretation. To me, Spike and Twilight are 100% siblings. That's the type of dynamic they have. Not only that, but being siblings is superior to being parent and progeny.
That's my personal take on it at least. Other than that it was a well written first fan fiction.
Considering the fact that this was your first attempt at writing a My Little Pony fanfiction, you did phenomenally well!
I look forward to seeing what else you come up with! Though, considering English isn't your native tongue, I would recommend getting an editor/proofreader if need be.
Sad but sweet!
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Thank you for your feedback.
As you said, it is a specific interpretation. I do realize some people feel more confortable with a sibling relationship, which I'm perfectly fine with. But as far as I'm concerned, I'm into Mom Twilight/Son Spike.
You also mentioned grammar mistakes? May I know which ones?
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If that's what you truly think, please have a phenomenal thank you in return! ❤️ I'll make sure new fanfics are published in the near future. :)
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Thanks!
What a strong debut piece. :D There is a lot to like about this story, and it tackles something I'm sure a lot of us have noticed about the show. The feels were powerful with this one.
I am so amazed. This is your first fanfic on this site and it's already one of my favorites. I can't wait to see what else you will write.
I just loved how you explored Twilight and Spike's relationship, how you explored Twilight and Spike's guilt, and when Twilight was talking and how she wasn't perfect with her words but she got exactly what she meant.
You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more of your work!
How dare your first fic here be a warm fuzzy feeling tear jerker
Was wonderful to read! Congrats on your first fic posting here!
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I'd have to go back through to catalog all of them but if highly suggest using Grammarly as a basic aid in the future. That's what my German best friend uses for his fan fiction.
This has got to be the best Twilight/Spike relationship fic I've ever read! It doesn't just give Spike and Twilight a specific relationship, it points out they have such a strong bond that they have a multitude of relationships. Assistant, Mother, Sister, friend: Spike is all of these and more. Whatever the future holds, they can always count on each other.
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Thank you SO much! You have no idea how much I LOVE reading comments like this! ❤️❤️
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I have no words to express how grateful I am to you for just making my day. So, just... THANK YOU. ❤️
I'll do my best to ensure my next fanfics will make as many people happy as possible!
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Yes, I did dare and I'm very proud of the result. 😁😁
Thank you very much!
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I'll remember that, thanks.
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I agree with everything you said, and I kindly thank you for such a compliment!
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Oh, I can imagine. Comments are like crack. :P
This is easily one of my favourite fics on this site, it's incredible this is your first one! I always liked seeing Twilight and Spike be considered mother and son, and this is by far one of the best fanfics at showing that. I'll read the next stories you write, that's for sure!
Also, as someone whose first language is also French, seeing you write this makes me a bit more confident wanting to write my own fanfiction one day, so thanks!
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Thank you very much, your words went straight to my ❤️
And I can only encourage you to write about your favorite ponies; this is such an amazing thing to do!
Have faith in yourself and go for it!
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Hiiii, I am your follower
It's amazing that this is your first fanfic and it's of such good quality.
Very favourable.
I'm a big fan of Twilight being Spike's mother, so, this fits!
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I appreciate your support!
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Why, thank you!