This is the tale of a young colt named Disker.
Disker is a young orphan who recently got evicted from his parents house in Cloudsdale. As such he has been moved to the Ponyville orphanage in order to get a new start and escape some of the ghost of his past.
As he spends more time in the little town he will meet some new friends and get the chance at a good future that he thought he had lost with his parents. He may even get his cutie mark.
Takes place a few years after current time in show. Easy way to tell is that the CMC have their cutie marks and are now old enough for jobs about mid-teens. Technology has also advanced to gem/magic generated electricity and vision projection.
Side project I am working on starring my OC. Rated Teen for some innuendos here and there.
More!!!! Yeah!!!
Honestly. Feels rushed, not a lot but just enough that some things will need to be worked on.
Grammar wise. Work on it. There are some points where I'm confused on what you're trying to say.
I'm going to favorite this story anyways. I see a lot of potential in it.
I'd say.... 8/10
did his godfather just evict him
1509365
Thank you. I am working hard on the next chapter to avoid those points of rushedness.
1509845
No he got evicted by the office of Princess Celestia. She alao signed the eviction notice.
1511335
That's good to hear. If you ever need help, just ask.
1512831
Do you think you could rustle me up some vectors of Disker for me?
Updatttttttte :D
1885147
Shut up it's almost done.
Awww why is this on hiatus? It seems really good
