An insomniac Rainbow Dash gets banished to Canterlot, then put in a dungeon in the place where she's been banished to. The chance to rest should do her good, as will a visit from the Princess of the Night herself.
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Nightbreak
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Seems incomplete, perhaps is just the open ending, another short chapter may remove this feeling.
good story i really like these luna stories especialy the stories where she falls in love with someone i've noticed that she's mostly paired up with twilight sparkle not that there's a problem with it i just like to see luna with others like maybe gilda the griffin i sure would like to read more about those kind of stories featuring yours truly princess luna.
“I mean, the Princess getting this actively involved in a Pegasus who can't fall asleep?”
-When said pegasus is one out of six personnel necessary to operate the country's super-weapon, not to mention the equivalent of a Navy SEAL reservist (if those actually existed, which I doubt they do), then no, no it is not at all weird for her to take charge of getting her back to operational status.
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. . . amen.
Had to scroll up and fav after reading about half of it.
That was nice little read. I always like the concept of a dreamscape and having Luna be the ruler/caretaker of it is a pretty nice touch (love that it's her stand-in for holding court). It's funny how this is a fic where a whole lot of what needs to be done doesn't really get done... we've got the set-up for sequels (a pair of them at least with the use of Trixie) built into the fic too.
Anyways, overall, real nice fic.
It was a great story i really liked it, but i agree with the first poster, it seems a little empty. it just ends, and i feel there should be something more there.
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I can understand how you feel that way. Note that it was written for the Happy Luna challenge on EqD last year (and it was quite literally thrown in at the last minute, written in about 3 days.)
I like this. Very much. Also, since it did end on a somewhat open note, maybe it could continue/have a sequel focusing om Trixie's recovery and showing her true self? Just a thought.
Otherwise, wonderfully written and excellent delivery