After being ostracized from Zephyr Heights due to their flight scam the Royal Family have gotten used to their new lives hopping from Bridlewood to Maretime Bay trying to get used to their new normal, that is until news of Queen Haven’s estranged husband and father to Pipp and Zipp is revealed to have come back from War therefore equaling to their golden ticket to get their status back in Zephyr Heights.
Zipp though is the only one against him returning due to all the bad memories she has of him and some things she‘s found out after a private investigation. Her first instinct is to run away, but after some encouragement from someone she holds dear. She decides to come back and make it her mission to uncover his schemes and stop them.
With having to juggle romantic feelings and also being thrown into a political marriage without her knowledge, can Zipp stop her dad and step up to be the Queen she needs to be?
All right, this has my attention
A very interesting start. The concept you describe also seems interesting.
There was some good humor with the whole 'everyone thinks Pipp has a boyfriend and it's Hitch' thing. Zipp reaction was perfect, although I wonder. Based on what you said in the summary, is it just 'big sister instinct' or is there some jealousy involved.
Anyway, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this story and I'm definitely curious to see how it turns out. You're off to a good start for your first story. Congratulations!
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Hey! Thanks for the interest, to answer your question it was mostly sisterly instinct, but some jealousy does peek out… when I first wrote the dialogue it would 100% be jealousy, but I didn’t like how that came outside
From how I imagine Zipp…
Even though she likes him, she loves her sister more (Angelic and Eliza Schuyler thing I guess) so she wouldn’t be that bothered if they were together, she’d just feel hurt but warm up to the feeling that atleast Pipp is with someone she knows will protect and love her whole heartedly 😊
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😎
Edit: Also loved your Dragon Family fic, it was just the perfect fluff I needed on a rainy day
Literally hasn’t been here for a minute, and I already hate this Thunder guy
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I’m glad, writing him was a headache 🤕
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You barely even wrote for him.
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I've barely posted him you mean.
Drafting up his character was the headache. First had to find out "Why isn't he mentioned in the movie at all?" He's at war.
But then why wouldn't his family make a quick note towards him like Argyle does about Sunny's mother; must mean he's distant with the family or left when they were young
Then came to working around each character's approach towards him for like 3 more chapters before having a revelation, "Oh he's not misunderstood, he's just really scummy!"
Afterward, I have to make his villain motivation and understand how I want him to be "defeated" and knowing that how do I make it to where his introduction can relay to the readers to dislike him (Thank you again)
Next chapter, you'll see more of what I'm talking about right now, but the full explanation for why he is just a scum will be in chapters 8-9 (My favorite chapters that I've written)
OK, at this point I don’t think Zipp really needs to uncover any lies as Thunder whatever the F he calls himself is a pretty s****y husband, father, ruler, and pony overall.
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I laughed at this, thanks for the comments