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Trixie steals Sunset Shimmer’s blood. She steals her heart too; hell, she steals her whole body.
As if that wasn’t enough, Sunset Shimmer gets targeted by a vampire-hunter and just tightly escapes the encounter only to fall prey to Trixie’s other urges.
This story won a reward in Sunset Shimmer + Villain writing contest.
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FluttershyRocks
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That was... hmm... something all right. Not my thing, but have a like
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Why do you say that?
Great story
12028333
It ought to be, you wrote it.
12028313 We may have added a one-too-many dashes of randomness into the collaboration.
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Oh okay and I like it so far and hope it gets a lot of likes.
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Because neither vampires nor bondage was ever my thing. Plus as 12028339 mentioned, the story reads a bit too random for my taste
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Still, it made me laugh a few times, so it deserved a like
12028341 It's already has a better rating than any of my other stories. I guess your magic touch really did the trick.
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Oh okay thanks for the like
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Yeah it definitely does and thanks for the comment and compliment too.
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All sorts of replies are highly appreciated.
Thanks for writing us those two comments.
If I can ask, which parts or aspects of the story did you enjoy the most?
The figure loosened its cloak revealing a massive pair of breasts. She revealed much more than that of course but the breasts were really the only thing Sunset noticed.
“Oh boy! Big milkies!” Sunset exclaimed
And this isn’t supposed to be mature?
12028796 Look at any woman in the street. You'll notice that they have boobs, even though they are fully dressed.
There is nothing revealing in this story. But yes, women do have torsos. Torsos still exist even when they are dressed. Nothing mature about that. In fact, that is Everyone rated.
12028350 12028584 Do you concur, my co-authors?
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Women have boobs, indeed.
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Yeah
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1. Puns
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2. Boobies puns
3. Trixie and Sunset sucking each other
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Good choices.
Best story this side of the equator! It is a must read for anyone above the equator, absolutely revolutionary, can't wait for this to be taught in public schools across antartica. Here take my likes
That wasn't the most atrocious thing I've ever read
I feel numb
12032134 This was our aim when writing, to create a story that will not be the most atrocious.
The second goal was to scar the reader's mind.
I will say this much. You may not know of Chloe from Life is Strange. She's exploitative, manipulative and generally a toxic influence in the protagonist (Max)'s life.
Trixie is that girl, but slightly more bearable. And she doesn't die in six different ways!
12034308 I'd love to see Chloe work in her sex dungeon. I bet it would be something to behold.
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Who is Chloe and what is Life Is Strange?
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Life is Strange is a video game.
Chloe... She's your protagonist's... dubious best friend.
To quote from the wiki on her personality
Did I say that Trixie is that girl? But less developed.
static.wikia.nocookie.net/life-is-strange/images/2/29/Chloe_.png/revision/latest/thumbnail/width/360/height/360?cb=20170925004113
She even has blue hair!
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Oh okay cool
You mentioned Skin-Tight BodySuit. Maybe, you should make that a running inside joke.
I am sorry that I am so late, but I was busy poll-working (on 2024-11-05, worked from 06:00:00 AM until Midnight). Then, my country fell to the ChristoFascists (Apathy won with 37%, ChristoFascism came in 2nd with 32%, Democracy came in 3rd with 30%, and 1% wasted their votes on 3rd parties and independents (please, adopt Compulsory Voting in your country before your Liberty, Democracy, and Freedom die between Apathy and an Extreme Minority willing to walk on glass for voting for seizing power with far less than half the country supporting them)).
The story is very random. It is amusing. I like it.
12041795 Skin-tight clothes are present in half of my stories already.
Did you recount the votes to make sure they're correct?
I'm glad you liked our story.
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Walabio
⸘Oh really‽ ¡I never noticed!
I am in this place called California:
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All voting is on paper. The ballots are human/machine-readable. All voters get ballot in the mail and can vote from home by mail. Sometimes something goes wrong or some people want to vote in-person. We have voting centers. I worked at VC 42 of the county (a section of the state).
The tabulators (machines) count the votes (all votes are human/machine-readable. we have the speed and accuracy of machines, but the vote can be hand-recounted.
We do count:
Arrive an hour before the polls open (early voting is in October). We check the numbers on all of the tamper-resistant seals:
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I skip to the paper:
After checking the numbers on the tamper-resistant seals on the paper. we open the blank paper. 1 poll-worker count the blank paper not knowing what the number should be and them another poll-worker recounts the blank paper knowing neither what the number should be nor what the other poll-work found. All paper must be accounted.
After closing the polls, before sending the ballots to the tabulators (2 poll-works are with the ballots at all times) and before putting new tamper-resistant seals onto the blank paper and recording the new numbers, 2 poll-workers recount all ballots, blank paper and spoilt ballots —— ¡the numbers must balance! The total number of cast-ballots must equal the total number according to the EPollBooks.
I wrote a blogpost about mine experiences as a poll-worker.
As for the Apathy, I wrote a blogpost about it. Since it is short, I include it here.*
I wrote a blogpost about mine experiences as a poll-worker.
I also wrote about how the world is screwed on my blog, the Skeptics' Guide to Equestria, and Ukraine.
It was hilarious. Sure, it is 1 and done, but 1-shots are fine.
*
As you might have heard, ChristoFascists won the 2024 Election. This is an analysis about what went wrong and how the misnamed Compulsory Voting could have prevented this calamity ——it is too late now!:
Democracy died between apathy and extremism:
It looks like Trump lost a few voters. The reason he won this time is voter-apathy; if all of those who voted for Biden would have gotten off of their off their arses and bothered to vote for Harris, democracy will have won.
Compulsory Voting arose from fear of this scenario:
Let us suppose that over half the voters are apathetic and do not vote. Let us suppose that we have a minority if motivated extremists (willing to walk on broken glass for voting for their extremist ideology) making up less than a quarter of the population. The remainder support democracy.
The extremists can seize power with less than ¼th of the nation supporting them.
Compulsory voting is a misnomer:
We Americans are lazy voters. We should use the misnamed Compulsory Voting:
Invented in Australia with precursors going back to Athens and the Roman Republic, Compulsory Voting requires that voters either go to a voting center or return the return-envelope, for the ballot, signed and dated. One does not need to vote at the voting center or one can return the envelop signed and dated without a ballot. If one refuses to show up at a voting center or do not return a signed dated but empty return envelope, must pay a fine. Voters have the right not to vote (you can take a pony to water, but you cannot make the pony drink).
Since voters have to go to voting centers or return the signed and dated ballot-envelop, most voters do vote. It is common for over 90% of voters to cast a ballot.
Countries with Compulsory Voting get over 90% of the electorate to cast ballots. By forcing all to vote, compulsory voting keeps a minority of motivated extremists from seizing power. That is not far off of what just happened in the United States of America.
Democracy cannot endure if apathy allows motivated antidemocratic minorities of ideological extremists, to seize control.
12041954 It sounds like you had work cut out for you at the election. It would have been even more work if voting was obligatory.
Personally, I believe apathy is the right of every American.
Those who don't know who to vote for shouldn't be voting. Only informed people should vote.
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Walabio
Compulsory voting is a misnomer:
One has to return the mail-ballot or go to a voting center. The point is that, since people have to mail back the ballot or go to the voting center anyway, most voters, as in over 90%, vote. As apathetic as many of these vo\ters are, most are not extremist and vote for moderate candidates.
They could be as apathetic as they want, as long as the mail back the envelope or go to the voting center. Luckily over 90% do vote under Compulsory Voting.
The trouble is apathy allowing motivated extremist minorities to seize power. This is how democracy dies. This is how democracy died in the United States of America:
For a century, apathy grew. if it would be a candidate, it would have came in last after the Republicrats and Democans.. Then it came in 2nd between the Democans and Republicrats. Now, Apathy won with 37%. Although apathy rules, Trump has a cult and the Trump-cultists, making 32% the population would walk in broken glass for voting for him. They worship a golden statue of Trump made in China:
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That is real. 10s of millions of Americans worship that tacky golden statue of Trump.
Most of the apathetic are not Trump-Worshippers. If they had to vote, they would not vote for ChristoFascists. It is too late now:
It seems very likely that the Republic of Gilead (the name of the country after the coup in the Handmaid's Tale) has fallen to ChristoFascism. we are screwed.
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What happens if you don't do that?
Sometimes, you need an extremist at the helm.
Concessions are the result of moderate America. This is why we're approaching III World War.
I don't think anything should be forced on people. People should be free to live their own life. The government should only enhance, that experience, not limit it.
If apathetic people don't mind, I see no problem with it.
It's just 4 years. America will survive.
In the end, America isn't the government, but the people, and people haven't changed with this election.
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Walabio
One pays a fine:
Fine-Philosophy:
The rich and powerful invented our current system. The current system has fixed fines which are nothing for the rich but life-destroying for the poor:
In the video, a woman lives in a city with limited parking. To get to work, she can to park illegally. She got a 300.00-U$D ticket and did not have the money and went to prison.
Musk parks wherever he wants, racking up hundreds of parking tickets because the fines are nothing to him.
A great solution the poor love and the rich hate is a percentage of income or wealth.
Saving the country from extremism is important. I would set the fine at 10% of income. I shall create an example, but for making it neutral, I shall use Slovenia because, I am sure that neither of us know anypony living there, and, speaking both of economics and elections, the Average Slovene is now richer than the average UKian because the UK screwed itself with BrExit:
Nataša is a starving University-Student. She is a full-time Student with a part-time job. She earns a myriad (10,000) Euros/Year. She does not vote. 10% of her income is 1 KiloEuro.
Borut is a rich industrialist earning 100,000,000.00 €UR (a myriad squared). He does not vote. He have to pay a fine of 10,000,000.00 €UR.
¡Certainly! ¡Gas the Jews! ¡Invade Poland!
Incase you cannot tell, that was sarcasm.
I agree, up to a point:
For society to function, we have to require people to follow basic rules:
Citizens have to pay taxes and not defecate in the drinking water.
Everyone wants rights, but democracy requires responsibilities, like following traffic-laws so that one does not cause fatal accidents, for keeping society going. The United Nations lists 30 Human Rights. 1 common way of balancing rights and responsibilities is that for every, ght, one has a responsibility (they need not be paired, as long as the totals on each side match). I see voting as on both lists:
¡Voting is both an Human Right and a Responsibility!
Their right to be apathetic effects me. If you had horrendous diarrhœa because your neighbors defectated into your drinking water, you might conclude that their right to defecate wherever they want impedes on your rights.
Trump openly says that he wants to be a dictator, and told the Dominionists, those wanting a Christian Theocracy) that they only have to put him in office 1 more time and that will be the last time they will have to vote.
Yeah, the largest group are apathetic and the 2nd largest group forship a Golden Trump like a Golden Bull —— evidently, ¡the Dominionists do not read their Bible they claim to revere! ¡This is who we are!
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One should not pay a fine for activity.
Maybe a combination of both systems would be better, else homeless people would be above the law since they'd have to pay $0 for every fine.
If apathy is your enemy, extremism is the opposite.
Or being apathetic while Ukraine is unjustly being invaded by the occupator.
People keeping to themselves shouldn't be against the rules.
Harming others is bad. But doing nothing is not.
Let's assume that democracy is not the final system. There should be a way for the system to transition to the better one. If democracy fails, maybe that's a good thing.
Democracy is a bad system. Maybe we'll find a better one.
Extremists' voting affects you. Should all people therefore be forbidden from voting?
Now imagine arresting your neighbour for not doing that. For being apathetic to water poisoning.
In the past decade, America has been apathetic. That's why Iran will have nukes. I find it hard to believe Trump will be apathetic. Maybe he'll finally do some things that should have been done decades ago.
Suffering may cure them of apathy.
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Walabio
Mostly, parking tickets are a cash-grab, not not blocking firehydrants is legitimate:
Given that Apathy poses an existential threat to democracies, fining nonvoters is justifiable.
Tying the fines to income or wealth makes them fairer than a fixed value.
Since they have no money, they pay nothing anyway.
No. Extremism and Apathy are allies:
Apathy lets extremism win; the cultists worshipping the Golden Trump —— ¡their Holy Bible tells them not to worship a Golden Calf in Exodus! —— won with 32% of the support of eligible voters because 37% of eligible voters did not vote. Apathetic voters sitting on their arses are the reason the ChristoFascists won.
That is complicated:
Ukraine was not an official ally. We could not send troops, but we send arms. Let us look at what the ChristoFascists plan to do:
They plan to stop supporting Ukraine and which support to the Russian Federation. Ukraine is doomed. Extremism throws Ukraine under the bus. That is not all:
Trump plans to pull out of Nato and not honor mutual-defense treaties. Putin will conquer the former Soviet Republics, China will annex Taiwan, and North Korea will annex South Korea. I wrote about this in the group Ukraine.
¿How is extremism better than moderation for Ukraine. Given that moderation gave weapons to Uraine and extremism supports Putin, it seems to me that moderation is better than extremism. for Ukraine.
I shall cite the war in Gaza:
Isral is rightly pissed that Hamas murdered almost a myriad Isrælis. In tits wrath, Isræl kills Palestinian Civilians. The moderates try to moderate the response of Isræl. Trump want to let Isræl depopulate the GazaStrip, thus wiping out Hamas, along with the civilians, as long as Trump can build a new beachfront resort on newly annexed coastal territory.
Extremism seems worse than moderation to me.
When the apathy of people hurts others, that is a problem. The burden is very light:
In California, we use Vote-By-Mail. All an apathetic voter would have to do is open the envelope, remove the return-envelope, sign and date it, and put it back into the mail. That is it. The beauty is that in countries with Compulsory Voting, over 90% of voters return a filled ballot (since I have to return the envelope anyway, I might as well vote) and average candidates selected in nations with Compulsory Voting are more moderate than nations without Compulsory Voting; (low turnout usually leave minorities of motivated extremists voting).
In this case not voting hurts others and the nonvoter too. It is like not paying taxes.
Historically, fascism and theocracy are bad.
Perhaps we shall, but we should keep democracy until we find the new system. Ditching democracy in hopes of finding something better is like trying to cross the ocean by jumping into the water and building a boat out of driftwood as one goes.
Apathy lets the extremists win. Compulsory Voting dilutes the extremism. As for getting rid of voting, then it would not be a democracy. ¿Which system would you like to replace it? Interestingly, one could make a case for sortition (filling offices randomly from the population).
It seems to me that defecating in the drinking water should be a crime. If you like shitty water, go for it, but I prefer shit-free water.
Giving 1 demented man unchecked power seems like a recipe for disaster. I have an example:
After his criming came out, President Nixon took to heavy drinking in 1974. Late in Nixon's term, as his paranoia and his abuse of alcohol grew out of control, Secretary of Defense James Schlesinger and Secretary of State Henry Kissinger instructed White House staff and the Joint Chiefs that any emergency orders from the president (particularly those that involved nuclear weapons) be approved by them 1st.
Imagine a demented man, out of touch with reality, just ordering a random nuclear strike against a random country. His marriage is 1 of convenience. Maybe, he will nuke Slovenia out of marital frustration.
But, ¿will we have election for them to vote?
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They take the risk. Sometimes risks don't pay.
The system doesn't matter. People matter.
But they can get in debt with fixed fines.
I bet aesthetics are fine with it.
America vowed to protect Ukraine from invasions. In exchange, Ukraine gave up on all of its nuclear arsenals.
Ukraine should not have trusted America to keep its end of the deal. If they had nukes now, they could have defended themselves. America is responsible for the mess they're in. America disarmed them, and now they can't fight back.
Sounds about right. But I think WW III will be needed to achieve all that.
Extremism will support Israel even more.
Can't make an omelet without breaking a few eggs.
There are hard things that need to be done. Moderation will never even attempt them.
Apathy should be our constitutional right.
Voting should be reserved for those who care.
It worked wonderfully for Trump supporters. They weren't hurt by apathy at all.
I think Trump has his own system in mind.
That wouldn't work. However, maybe we can evolve democracy into that other system. Apathy might be the first necessary step.
Hey, if your boat named Democracy is sinking, you might as well do that; and rip some of the planks of the ship while you're at it.
Dictatorship is great, as long as you have the right dictator at the helm.
Look how smart China is. It plays a long game. America can't even see one year into the future.
Indeed. But not shitting and not cleaning should not be a crime. People can be apathetic if they want.
Or salvation.
America having a moderate government is the reason why we're approaching WW III. They had decades to act and they didn't. Now shit will hit the fan.
Don't get me wrong, I don't like Trump. But young people are forbidden from the presidency. Only old people may apply. Blame the system.
The bottom line is, Trump won fair and square under the current democratic system. Everything is as it should be.
You have 4 years to convince people to vote for Woke agenda instead. Good luck with that.
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It takes over an hour just to respond. ¿How about we go to closing arguments? I shall let you go 1stly.
12043249 Freedom is the most important aspect of society.
I don't mind making voting easier, but I do mind the fines even though a person isn't hurting anybody with her passivity. Not voting means you're voting for all the candidates because you don't care who's in charge.
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Apathy allows motivated extreme minorities to win, thus hurting all. Experience shows that the higher the turnout, the more moderate the winning politicians are, with the most moderate politicians winning in countries with "Compulsory Voting".
¡Great Debate!
12043466 Great debate. I always love agreeing to disagree with you.
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This is a long message
12043743 And this is a short message.
12044214
Cool
12044434 Hot.
I mean, you're hot.
I mean... Oh, never mind.
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So have you made a new story yet?
12044531 No. Been busy in RL. Have you written a new story yet?
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No not yet
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In your opinion, ¿who won the debate?
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No comment
Wearing those dislikes like badges of honor. Same as always, eh?
12048584 It's just 30. I saw worse.
And there are 18 upvotes, so it can't be all bad (because it's a collaboration, so it's not all Bad).