Its basically the game Glory of Heracles [Proof of the soul but with FIM characters instead]
Icarus= Fluttershy [Same kind of Personality]
Leucos= Rainbow Dash
Rarity= Axios
Iphecles/Heracles= Applebloom [Replaced later by Applejack]
Eris= Twilight Sparkle
Princess Piazza= Pinkie Pie
Captain Gazuth= Scootaloo
Daedalus/General Applejack and Achilles = Daring Do
Hero [Yeah not hero of the game just a minor character called Hero]= Sweetie Belle
Eudoros= Big Mac
Patroclus= Derpy
No blood but does have character Death
I have the game for DS. I think I might give this a read
If you want to make the link to the battle theme work, the link option is your friend (The first of the four buttons on the editing screen, next to the image button. After inserting the link, be sure to incorporate some of the wording from your fic so that not only will people read, they can click on it to know that there is music accompanyment.) So far, this story's almost making me want to play the game again.
It's hard to imagine a filly as a hardened captain sometimes
After beating the game many times, I don't wish to remember what happens much later in the story
1518860 I'm actually changing the storyline a bit so that Applebloom doesn't have to fade into ether [The only one who's gonna die is Achilles]
Not bad for a first try
But try it like this
1518886 never thought of linking it like that before
1518846 I guess so I thought it might make Scootaloo sound more rough and rough
Liking the new cover art/ profile pic
1703343 T-thanks I thought it would be nice
I rember getting stuck near the end, but otherwise liking the story of the game.
Nice work.
3819948 I'm keeping it close to the games plot but making tweaks like some characters don't die but almost perish