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"In order to put true emotion into a story, the author has to have experienced those emotions to replicate them."

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(2nd person)

You, are Anon, in 7th grade, and depressed. Now matter how hard you try, you always feel alone as the darkness wells up inside you. But then one day..it all changes..

It was a normal time after school when Twilight Sparkle, a unicorn from another world, ended up right in front of you. She was on a mission, and you were willing to help and give her a home to stay in for the time.

It was difficult to keep Twilight a secret while also kinda being a father figure, all while you still had middle school to deal with. You taught her all the wonders of your world's history, empires, wars, and she was amazed by the human world you told her about.

One day, she had to go back home, you both said to never forget each other. Then it was done, and now your life was happy, all thanks to her...


Who knew how badly the future would become. After Twi left, your world became hell, all humans suffered gruesome deaths but you were one of the very few who survived... You saw your family and friends all die in your vision, and now...you are broken.......and then...

Twilight came to your world again to see what the planet had become... Before long, the planet was about to die, so you escaped with Twilight to her world, Equestria.

You cheated death, but are now in a pony body, and now paralyzed, as more memories of Earth slowly try to break you... Twilight knows that what happened changed you, but you still won't tell her what truly happened to make your amazing world into death itself...

Now, you have no choice but to continue on and make a second life and move on... but the past still remains, filling your mind with more and more memories.. You went through troubles going through 16 years of life on Earth...but it was all worthless....In this perfect world of ponies, you need to be a better human...

but....are you still a human?.......

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Comments ( 17 )

Could be an interesting story. Sense Twilight seems to know his name already, I am guessing that she had observed him and intentionally pull him out of his world. I would seriously wonder why she decided to do that and pick him out of all the humans there? Is there a deeper scream at play here for her intentions with him? Keep it up.

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Everything will be explained over time with memories and dreams. How Twi transported to Anon's world and met him, how they became friends, how Twi went back to her world, what turned Earth into hell, and when Twi came back to see the blood staining the world. I'm really excited to write more about this crazy story!

Nice to see an update on the story so soon. It's interesting that Anon is now the repository of all humanity, somehow. I wonder how did that happened(probably Twilight's fault) and if that could after his mind in some way? I mean having the mind of all of humanity's memories can't be good for his limited tiny human/pony, no way his sanity will last very long. there must be something protecting it. I am guessing Twilight will find a way to all that she can out of his memory repository, no way they can write it all down what he know, so it's probably a spell to write down everything. I am guessing she picked him so that there is at least something of humanity that could be preserved for posterity. On that same note Anon could also learn from sifting thought the memories on how his world went completely to hell like that, all with all the other crap it was up to, if he has accesses to all the evil souls of the world. I wonder what will be his goal in this story being previously last living human, well now he is a pony now, he is a living artifact and when he dies all of humanity will be forgotten, I am sure this won't make his feel any pressure from that... Heck being a brony he could know absolutely all the fan theories

(based on the story scenarios I played in my head during 8th grade)

What do you mean by that?

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wdym.... it says it right there. During 8th grade I imagined stories in my head all the time...

Not exactly a big fan of the famous Annon idea, but I am curious to know what it's all about. I wonder What more Luna will discover in Annon's mind?

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what exactly do you mean by that, do you mean your not a big fan of the "Anon" Name?

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I mean that that the protagonist is already a celebrity of some kind in Equestia specifically. It's not a deal breaker for me, and doesn't mean I won't like it, just that I am less interested in it, it's just a personal taste nothing more. You can move on as business as usual if you want to, you might pull it off in making a interesting twist to the story with that trope,

Interesting, it just seems that Anon was well known because Twilight kept gushing over about him to her friend when she was first visiting Earth. I wonder why it seems that Anon doesn't remember her or doesn't seem to register very strongly. It was interesting to see Anon questioning about who he was non being the last representative of a race what he is no longer apart of. I wondering what direction this fic will go with that melancholic mood of it at the moment, which is a welcome change for a HiE story. I wonder what Twilight was doing exactly on earth was she there just to explore a new world, or was there looking for something there or was tracking it?

“It’s not like we have any other option! Open the portal!” You demand as Twilight’s horn lit it up and a blue portal appears next to you both.

No….I can’t start all over….I may have cheated death….but now…I have nothing left…

Who am I now? A pony….or a human?....

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“O-Okay..”(—— Spike said nervously, still not taking his glance off Anon as he took out a parchment.
“Ready when you are…”

You slowly go back into the world of reality.

“I can’t believe it!?”(—— The party pony said, “Anon in our world!

You put some focus on your right foreleg, put pressure, then move-

Made me think of this Monk episode.
2:07

Hey, know it's been a while, but I'm back. I had nothing else to do since right now I'm healing from wisdom teeth removal. Yaaayyyy....

0:53

First off, ouch. Second, that’s a lie, she looked fine after the session. Is she….hiding something?

How does he go to the bathroom?

you tried hard to not think negatively in this time of crisis in your life,

This isn’t real, just….for crying out loud,

the only thing you could find were the magma cracks in the crust.

Flutershy gave a sympathetic look to Twilight as she set her cup down.

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