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Rex Ivan


Fun with rusty metal.

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Twilight and her friends test out a virtual reality machine to play a few video games.

This was written for a MLP video game fan fiction contest, and the readers would have been familiar with the games mentioned in order to get the jokes. For everyone not familiar with the games, I have included an index of their descriptions in chapter two.

This was a short experiment to see what would happen if I made a situational set up, and then showed the aftermath of it all, without actually showing what occurred. I wanted to see if I could effectively create enough of a framework, that the story would be logically evident and the readers would be able fill in the gaps with something entertaining. Please let me know what you think, and if this experiment failed or succeeded.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Is it wrong that I laughed hardest when Fluttershy was completely broken?

Probably.

But yeah, great fic.

I should feel bad.
But I don't.
...
WHY DON'T I FEEL BAD FOR FLUTTERSHY D:

#3 · Aug 28th, 2011 · · · story ·

Is it just me or is Pinkie gone even more crazy than she already is??
I mean she "sounded" like she had a Celestia damned Cupcakes reference in that game or something...

...oh well nothing wrong with it...right?:pinkiecrazy:

#4 · Oct 3rd, 2011 · · · index ·

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It took me a little bit to figure out which game she played, but once I did, her reaction was completely understandable...

What I wouldn't give to be there when they visit the R&D department...:twilightsmile:

I have 1 complaint.

Needs a sequel or a second chapter with Uganda Knuckles. De ponies need de wae.

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