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Zack Catcher


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In a heartwarming tale of connection and self-discovery, Twilight Sparkle encounters Star Tracker who shares her passion for the night sky. Initially, they bond over their shared love for the stars, but Twilight learns that life holds deeper meanings beyond friendship as they spend time together.

Through candid conversations and heartfelt moments, she witnesses the struggles he faces, prompting her to reflect on her own feelings. As their relationship deepens, Twilight discovers the transformative power of love, friendship, and understanding, ultimately realizing that sometimes, the most profound connections can lead to unexpected places.

take's place at the end of

Once Upon a Zeppelin

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 25 )

I like it and I don't know why but I hope this story continues :twilightsmile::heart:

12021829
Oh it will one like per chapter so if I get enough likes then I will make the same amount of chapters

12021851
Well you have my like . I really hope we get to the point of ... Well you know:twilightblush:

I forgot star tracker existed.

12021929
Lol I might make nsfw scene for this book

Nice chapter albeit it a little fast:twilightsmile:

12024695
All I needed was to get star tracker to ponyville

Zeus must be different in the mlp world.

heh nice chapter (sorry i was grounded)

Without thinking, I immediately pulled him into a hug, wrapping my wings around him. He continued to whimper quietly at first, but after a few seconds, he calmed down and gently broke the hug. “I’m... I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to be a burden. It’s just that it’s the first time I’ve talked about them since, you know...”

Without thinking, I immediately pulled him into a hug, wrapping my wings around him. He continued to whimper quietly at first, but after a few seconds, he calmed down, the tension in his shoulders easing slightly. When he gently broke the hug, he looked up at me, a mix of embarrassment and vulnerability in his eyes.

Uhhh… accidentally left an earlier version of the paragraph in?

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Meh it's fine but thanks for the support the next chapter will be released next week

Yay new chapter I like it but its a bit short might I make a suggestion when you have a draft for a chapter release it and use the comments to make changes

12098745
ok i might try it, but the next one is going to be longer, with more blushing, flirting and a kiss

She smirked. "well if i didn't know any better i would say that you jealous"

I blinked, my cheeks suddenly feeling warm. "W-what?! Jealous, That’s not—! I would never—"

Accidentally left that in?

Well I'll be! You've really managed to turn something that felt incredibly rushed, into something incredibly sweet and thoughtful! I'm absolutely going to enjoy this!

Also, Star Tracker, he just like me for real! :twistnerd:

I smiled, shaking my head. "Relax, Star Tracker. It’s fine."

I smiled, shaking my head. "Relax, Star Tracker. It’s fine."

Also you've got this twice in there!

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Ya I know the first chapter was rushed it felt rushedd but I really didn't have much of an idea to make it so twilight and star tracker are at the point I want them to be at

12128518
No prob! :raritywink:

Your fic is awesome either way! :twilightsmile:

Nice sorry I didn't comment last time I was grounded I just now read them

If this keeps up, you're going to kill me with cuteness! :rainbowkiss:

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Well I'll start making arrangements because the cuteness is only going to get worse or better depending on how you see it.

Also a hint for the ending it's going to be heart wrenching

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