Twilight wasn't one to sit alone in bars and stare at an empty glass. On the one rare occasion she found herself in that position, however, she thought to herself that though breaking up with somepony hurt, it was far worse when it didn't hurt at all
A small lapse of judgment on Rarity's part sets in motion a series of events leading to realization, admission and development of the feelings of three mares for Spike. How will this affect their friendship? Who will win his love? Read and find
Rarity has been struggling with her image for longer than she can confess. All her mare friend Twilight wants to do is help her even if she doesn't know what to do. Rarity struggles with accepting help.
Speaking from experience, Rarity's mannerisms, difficulty believing others' reassurances and difficulty accepting help can all apply equally strongly to clinical depression. I hope you can manage to do a follow-up that chronicles Rarity's gradual improvement.
But she couldn’t help how every time she looked in a mirror she saw a body she was dissatisfied with, no matter how many times people said her body was nice she couldn’t believe it. She barely ate anymore and when she couldn’t fit into a dress from a year ago she locked herself in her room for a week.
Could just mean she gotten taller.
Rarity was used to lying by now. She’s been lying for months to everyone. A, I can’t go out today. I'm very busy with the shop, or I'm feeling under the weather darling. She never went out anymore unless it was to her therapist, her friends knew she was struggling and have been ever so patient and kind, especially her mare friend Twilight, she always tried to be there for Rarity even when Rarity pushed her away.
Kinda confused why that's there. Also it's "marefriend".
“Don’t look at me like that!” She heaved, "I’m not one of your projects that you can just fix , She hissed."
“I’m not one of your projects that you can just fix," She hissed.
There's no quotations after "fix" but after "hissed" when Rarity isn't saying "she hissed" and is instead being explained on Rarity's reaction.
I enjoyed the story. There was a few mistakes but only minor.
Told you to go to Maternity Wards to pick out that off brand foal... They have an updated color catalog too Why didn't I think of that? The Cakes went with a Pegasus and a unicorn! How would that work? You could get a hybrid , Half shiny scales and half fur and mane... You'll be so busy you wont have time to sweat the small stuff I'm busy running the Kingdom as it is Idea! I can start a foal line imagine shiny scales and fabulous fur! The combinations are unlimited!
12018385 Wait really? In every story across this site, they say "Marefriend," there's been 1 or 2 stories where they say "girlfriend" and I've read over 1,300 stories.
Speaking from experience, Rarity's mannerisms, difficulty believing others' reassurances and difficulty accepting help can all apply equally strongly to clinical depression. I hope you can manage to do a follow-up that chronicles Rarity's gradual improvement.
I might continue with her journey, I do have some ideas on what to do next!
Could just mean she gotten taller.
Kinda confused why that's there. Also it's "marefriend".
“I’m not one of your projects that you can just fix," She hissed.
There's no quotations after "fix" but after "hissed" when Rarity isn't saying "she hissed" and is instead being explained on Rarity's reaction.
I enjoyed the story. There was a few mistakes but only minor.
Thank you, I'm still a relatively new writer so I still make minor mistakes!
Told you to go to Maternity Wards to pick out that off brand foal... They have an updated color catalog too
Why didn't I think of that? The Cakes went with a Pegasus and a unicorn!
How would that work?
You could get a hybrid , Half shiny scales and half fur and mane... You'll be so busy you wont have time to sweat the small stuff
I'm busy running the Kingdom as it is
Idea! I can start a foal line imagine shiny scales and fabulous fur! The combinations are unlimited!
Why me?
Why not?
Do her friends know she has been going to therapy?
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Yes they do.
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In canon, it's "girlfriend." Thus spoke Scootaloo in Season 2, Episode 17 "Hearts and Hooves Day."
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I know, but I just like the word marefriend better
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Wait really? In every story across this site, they say "Marefriend," there's been 1 or 2 stories where they say "girlfriend" and I've read over 1,300 stories.
Yup, Rarity's behavior is relatable. It's funny how accepting help always feels so wrong.
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Yup. It's remarkable how nearly-universal that piece of fanon became.