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For a long time my dreams were the only escape from the cold walls of the hospital room, dreams about a better world, of mystic creatures, of green plains, dreams where i was not me, but another creature in harmony whit the nature around me. This is the story of the world that i dreamed of when i went to sleep for the last time.
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Say to someone don't be scare work rarely . Okay i sense a good story i give you my time don't disappoint me bro
Some basic spelling and grammar checking would do wonders here.
Interesting premise. No idea on the direction of the story yet.
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Almost had a brain aneurysm reading that comment, took three readings to untangle the real meaning XD
Hmm, interesting.
With
Good
Its
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If It's hard to read why did force yourself to do it
Introducing start, I look forward to more and yeah a few spelling and grammar mistakes but overall very well done.
Seems pretty good so far
Very interesting, solid intro chapter.
Do humans dream of magic lands? Well, do robots dream of electric sheep? Can't say I know an answer for either.
Excellent story. I look forward to your works :3
Yes this is great ♥, please more.
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I Will do my best, I promise
Thank you all for the coments, I Will try to publish at least once per week
Off to a great start already.
Already liking this story, though the fact the title sounds like a magic the gathering card is a nice little bonus lol
Good*, and I think you might want to add a 'so' between "say" and "myself" if you want.
Forgot an 'e' there.
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Thanks for the help, corrections done
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Still a lot more corrections to make. You do know that 'i' when one is referring to themselves is always supposed to be capitalized, right? That's the most basics of basics.
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They probably aren't a native speaker. At least they're trying imo.
Zap apples! And interesting to have her so far back in the timeline.
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Actually I noticed a surprisingly high number of people on the internet who keep making that spelling error.
its fucking nice story i can fell it
Wonderfully done beautifully written and almost perfect. Truly a work of art that I very rarely get to see.
There are quite a few spelling mistakes, and I'm pretty sure there was a swap over to a different language for a couple words, but it was overall a fun read. Hope we see the next chapter soon
English isn't your first language.
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Yeah, maybe edit and correct the chapter at late night wasnt my Best idea
JA, hermoso
Vos usas traductor o ya sabes inglés????
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hay un par de frases por aquí y por allá con las que debo usar traductor, pero en su mayoria lo escribo todo en inglés por mi cuenta.
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Hago lo mismo jaja
No se porque me dió tanta gracia que cambies de inglés a español en un solo párrafo así de repente
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Si...culpo a estar haciendo las correcciones del capítulo en la madrugada
Hare las correcciones mañana antes de comenzar a trabajar en el siguiente capitulo
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Miy bien, sinceramente me re gusto esto, me sorprendió que tenga 5k palabras leí que tenía 1000 xd
Suerte bro
Very nice chapter. The surprise meeting between the tribes promises to be fun.
I loved how it as written, english is not my first language too
I'm already liking this
we need a new chapter its been too long without you ( imagine i sing all of that)
I'm liking this. Keep going.
if you need some help on some edits. i could. this is just a great thing you've written here pal!
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Good advice but I think you could say it a bit nicer
Really good story. Keep going