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What if Spike lived after the events of A Secret Admirer 3: Spike's Sacrifice (AU) (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/494376/a-secret-admirer-3-spikes-sacrifice-au)

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“Indeed.”

Upon hearing a collective gasp from the harem members who were still assembled around Spike’s body, the Princesses turn and see something unbelievable- Spike had opened his eyes.

“I-is Spike- am I imagining...” At a complete loss of words, the young Princess dashes to her lover’s side, kneeling besides his body. “Spike?” she asks hopefully.

“T-twilight? Why...why does everything....hurt so...much..?” the young drake weakly asks through his pain.

“Spike’s alive!” says Gabby with joy.

Smolder also smiles, wiping her tears and hugging the drake, being mindful of his injured condition. Thorax, who had been talking to the Princesses, turns to see the sight and smiles in relief, glad that his best friend is alive.

“We need to go to the hospital right now,” asserts Rainbow Dash, overjoyed but quickly realizing the extent of Spike’s injuries.

You did well. At least Spike is alive

I like to know when this will be finished.

i think you did rather well

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I can't give a definite answer, but I'm actually going to try and update regularly, so it shouldn't take too long.

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yooure welcome and the bot, already reported it for you

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youre welcome, hope it works out

This was some good stuff. A few things
1. This supports my theory from the original that if Spike never died, then Discord will have never been forgiven.
2. I can't wait to see how Discord will be tried with the others.
3. I also can't wait to see how Spike will be saved

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While I'm glad Discord got his karma when he got arrested by the guards under the order of Princess Twilight and Princess Celestia, the best part for Spike's harem, Ember, Thorax and the others is they saw that he's still alive

“That’s right, you vile being,” says the lavender unicorn, a disgusted expression upon her countenance. “These are only the finest anti magic chains in Equestria. We can’t have you getting clever and trying to escape now, can we?”

Update: Twilight's alicorn, remember

The usually shy pegasus spits on the ground near Discord and turns away, not looking back once. “I regret ever making the choice to reform you,” remarks Princess Celestia. “You should have stayed as a stone statue. And I should have known better than to send such a sly being to capture that centaur.”

Update: She even regrets for not sending Twilight to capture Tirek. Then Twilight and Starlight Glimmer remembers what Discord did in 'season 8 episode 14 A Matter of Principals'

Twilight wipes her tears and says, “Actually, I...I can’t, Princess. I’m sorry, but with what happened to Spike...I don’t feel stable enough to become the next ruler of Equestria.”

“There’s no need to apologize, my dear. I understand. I suppose this means we shall have to cancel our retirement,” Celestia says warmly, directing the last part towards her sister, who nods.

Update: She and Princess Luna also apologized to Twilight for not keep an eye on Discord

After Rarity had release him, Discord slowly stood back up. Once he got his bearings, he quickly notices everyone staring at him angrily, as he was now surrounded by the crowd, all alone as he stood in the center. The large army of multiple different creatures who stood as one against the L.O.D. now stand against him the mastermind behind it all.

Serve you right, you traitor. This is what happened you never think of the consequences you made.

Discord didn't know what to do. Despite having his powers back, he never felt so helpless. Now that everyone knows what he had done. He could only guess what will happen to him now...

And now you'll face justice for your crime to Equestria

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You got that right, Discord is in serious trouble!


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My favorite part is Thorax and Smolder are happy that Spike is okay.


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Smolder also smiles, wiping her tears and hugging the drake, being mindful of his injured condition. Thorax, who had been talking to the Princesses, turns to see the sight and smiles in relief, glad that his best friend is alive.

Same here. Let's hope the operation is success. I can't wait for Discord to get punished

Twilight wipes her tears and says, “Actually, I...I can’t, Princess. I’m sorry, but with what happened to Spike...I don’t feel stable enough to become the next ruler of Equestria.”

Something is wrong with 'but with what happened to Spike' you should rewrite it with 'Because of what happened to Spike...I don't feel stable enough to become the next ruler of Equestria'

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And the best part is Spike's on his way to recovery once the operation is done

“Indeed.”

Did Spike or Princess Luna said that?

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Princess Luna, because Celestia said it to her. Spike's also unconscious in this scene, remember?

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The only thing Spike's harem knows is that he'll be recovering in no time

Awesome! I like the part of Spike hugs two of his harem; Scootaloo and Smolder. I understand Spike forgive Discord.

"Discord's the one who brought him back from the dead. All because he wanted to make some test for me," the Princess continues. "He was also the one who made the Legion of Doom, while posing as an ancient foe of Equestria- Grogar."

"Discord did this?" the former captain of the Royal Guard spits out in disbelief.

Twilight nods, and Cadance seethes, "I knew he couldn't be trusted."

"How dare he," continues Shining. "How dare he do this! All because of him, my daughter almost got taken captive by some crazy ex-King, you all got put in danger, and Spike almost died!"

"He cannot get away with this," states Cadance angrily, and Shining nods.

"And he won't," promises Twilight. "He's been arrested, and his trial is tomorrow."

"Tell me, Twilight," says Shining Armor, an angry expression on his face, "what can Cadance and I do to help?"

Nice going, Discord. You upset Shining Armor and Princess Cadance after what happened to their baby daughter almost kidnaped by Sombra

I don't understand why you are so hard on Discord? He realized his mistake and according to the original plot he corrected himself and didn't do stupid thingsIf it comes to that, then let's put all the past villains behind bars. Starlight, who deliberately wanted to destroy everything, and even brazenly hypnotized her friends in one episode. Trixie, because of how she put so much at risk, Tempest, a cruel former unicorn. You are judging a character who has helped and will help a lot. He was created like this for balance, because harmony without chaos is nothing! In general, the fact that he was not killed did not make the situation better.In the story you are continuing, even with Spike's death, Discord was not punished so severely, but here everyone is evil, heartless, and Spike, who did not stand up for one of his best friends... Overall, I am disappointed with this outcome.

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I would have let him be forgiven completely, but the requester told me to do this...

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Ok, in that case I apologize

It's all their fault that I'm in this position now.

"It's all their fault that I'm in this position now."

They ruined everything. They just couldn't accept friendship, huh? All because of them, not only will I never see the light of day again, but I will never be able to be with Fluttershy.

"They ruined everything. They just couldn't accept friendship, huh? All because of them, not only will I never see the light of day again, but I will never be able to be with Fluttershy." I like that Discord is mad at the legion of doom for his downfall and ruined his life

Ugh, stupid glitch made me miss all the Updates but you did well. The trial, you could have looked it up.

After the first Bar, there's a large empty space i noticed

Interesting background and Paragraphs are a bit of a mess

With nothing left to say the Celestia ordered the guards to send a team of paramedics to take Cozy Glow to the hospital for a mental evaluation. The Royal Sisters already had a feeling the Cozy might be too "incompetent" to stand trial. When they went to pick her and put her on the bed, she resisted them. Eventually, they worked out a deal with her: She'd go with them, but only if Cobalt stayed with her the whole time. Cobalt was also on board with the plan. With that said, they loaded Cozy into the ambulance, and they rode off to the hospital. On his way out of the prison cell, Cobalt shot one last, piercing glare at Tirek. The old Centaur felt a chill run down his spine when Cobalt gave him a final dirty look. He had never stopped to think about the consequences of his actions. All he cared about was getting revenge on Princess Celestia and Luna for defeating him.

It's a bit insulting to call her incompetent, when we all know that she is mentally ill and have brain damage.

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Maybe. Eager to see what happens next and now i get a silly thought

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How should I say, whats spike's relationship to other foals, given scootaloo? Had the thought he could help a certain colt

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Scootaloo is a member of his harem, and which colt?

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Sure, but with such a status, look other foals up to him, or see being friends with him as great honor?

The colt, well...hanzal

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I guess both, and that could be interesting, but you'd have to discuss it with ChazMLPFIMX, as it's his request story.

They ruined everything. They just couldn't accept friendship, huh? All because of them, not only will I never see the light of day again, but I will never be able to be with Fluttershy.

Fix Discord's Speech marks. "It's all their fault that I'm in this position now." "They ruined everything. They just couldn't accept friendship, huh? All because of them, not only will I never see the light of day again, but I will never be able to be with Fluttershy."

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It's his thoughts, so it's in italic. He's not saying it; just thinking it.

Wonder what will happen next?

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You got that right. Discord is an idiot for not thinking the consequences he made.

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you realize how old my comment is? still, pity about tyrant

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