Nice opening. It's cute with humor that could appeal to a wide audience.

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It's foalcon, so it will only appeal to a very narrow audience.

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This is why I started being a little more vague with short descriptions.

12013595
You clearly haven't read any of my stories

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You haven't written many foalcon stories; at least not on fimfic. It's more than zero, even this year, so you're likely not ignorant of how things are.
The way I see it, foalcon stories used to be somewhat common, and there were enough readers that anything well written could get some traction. Now, only the best written stories are getting a good like/dislike ratio if it has foalcon.

But perhaps you interpret the numbers differently than I do.

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You're not wrong. Any upvotes is a victory. Featured is a miracle.