It hadn’t been a particularly beautiful or stressful day when it had happened. Just another day. Then without warning: ponies fell out of the sky, unicorn magic failed and the impossibly bountiful harvests stopped.
Magic is gone again. Sunny fears it's all her fault. So she goes for a walk.
Written in response to hearing the news of G5 being cancelled. This was written almost entirely in one shot overnight starting at 1 am after I sorted my thoughts. There was a lot left unfinished with G5 and a lot of questions that may have never had answers. There is a lot to think about now that G5 is cancelled.
Let's think about it.
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That was a really good story. Thank you.
G5 deserves to end on a high note like this.
Shouldn’t you wait until the final episode is actually out before you make this kind of story?
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I don't think they're going to answer these kind of questions. They've hardly acknowledged them. I can't imagine the two shorts left are going to give us closure. To my understanding it's just what they had in the pipeline when they got canceled.
good read, its extremely bittersweet. cheers g5, it was nice knowing you.
And we say bye bye miss Equestria pie
didn’t want anypony else to have to bare it. > "bear"
because its on our crystal > "it's"
The roots had lead into some kind of aquifer. > "led"
She looked around for answers, it was pitch black now. > Comma-splicing; better to split into two sentences.
a cold blue light lead outside. > "led" or "leading"
She was in some kind of giant chamber, the water pouring in > Comma-splicing again.
She saying she can fix ours but > "She's". Also this is desperately asking for some kind of pause before the "but". It's a bit rushed without it.
Yes but nature is a cycle and it will return. > Some kind of pause after the "yes". A simple comma is enough.
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I appreciate it. Thank you.