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Good opening, and nice to incorporate Wallflower and sunburst so early on
AMAZING intro to the movie, I am excited to see all the differences. We already had some big changes in episodes, but I have a feeling this story will have the biggest changes yet!
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Wallflower was used at the tail end of Book 3.
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SEAN CONNERY VOICE: Kid, you don't even know the half of it.
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I AM SO PUMPED UP
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Well using her further now
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She's clearly the opposite of her human counterpart.
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Indeed
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Did you get the Disney movie reference?
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Still trying to think on it
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Here’s a hint: it involves the circus.
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Now I get it. Dumbo. When one of the clowns gently dabs a house plant with water only for it to grow tall and knock him on his back
Awww yeah! We’re back with Nine Elements series! And now jumping into the first EQG story!
I’m looking forward to seeing how this will turn out! What a great!
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Close. It was actually a watering can.
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome
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Btw quick question, I’m guessing each EQG movie will be its own part? Right?
As this is part 1 of the movies and guessing Rainbow Rocks will be part 2, correct?
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They’ll be their own books, yes.
Pretty good start so far.
Guessing that was likely human Sunset who was watching and will try to steal the crown instead of pony Sunset. Curious how she'll still manage to escape the Mane 6 + Spike given unlike pony/canon Sunset, human Sunset hasn't had any experience with being a pony before this.
I wonder why the story is rated M rather than E like the rest of Nine Elements? Was it a mistake or is there something darker than canon coming up?
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Yes, it’s human Sunset that was lurking. It’s rated M because there’ll be a lot of swearing.
Why is this one rated M for mature?
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You'll see why in the next chapter.
Good start, nice to see Wallflower and Sunbrust appear.
Hello there. Thanks very much for getting the next story started up. REALLY appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, you did an excellent job on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked the Dumbo reference when Wallflower was demonstrating her magic (which most Earth Ponies will have in 1000 years, but now is largely limited to Wallflower) - and speaking of G5, also liked that little jab at Haven not taking off the crown in the first movie. And, yes, in general the OFFICIAL introductions to Wallflower and Sunburst in this universe were definitely appreciated as well as stuff about Flash handling the transport of the Crystal Mirror.
Definitely looking forward to more of this and I promise I'll look over your other stuff very soon and I apologize in advance for not doing so earlier. Nothing to blame except self-admitted laziness.
Even if I chose not to watch the Equestria Girls franchise, I'll give this a read
Nice starts and great seeing Sunburst and... Walflower Bush make earlier appearances.
Why am I not surprised that Sunburst was going to be Sunset Shimmer's brother here due to the popularity of everybody seeing them as siblings?
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Thanks.
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Thanks.
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That idea was pitched by one of the co-writers before the series started. It was in the Christmas special.
Something's definitely off about Sunset that Wallflower and Sunburst can see
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Yeah. Not just her behavior, but, her aura color, too.
We’re so close!
Next chapter, it’s beyond the mirror and into the EQG world!
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Yep. Now do you see why it's listed as mature?
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Oh definitely. I see why it’s rated M for Mature
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There's more reasons to come.
Damn, who knew the human Sunset had a dirty mouth (especially with the kid show restriction thing being gone here).
Guessing that implies the different colored aura is due to her being a different counterpart so the human version has a blue aura instead of red aura. I wonder if this means technically the other human counterparts have different colored auras from their pony counterparts when they're ponies in Equestria?
Wonder how much the other human counterparts swear? I'd imagine human Rainbow Dash is certainly up there with human Sunset in the swearing department (especially with this version mentioning the pony counterpart already taught Scootaloo some Equestrian swears). Human Rarity's likely too classy for that and Human Fluttershy is too shy for that (unless it's in a "quiet ones snapping" moment). Human Applejack probably isn't that far behind in swearing even if it likely isn't on Sunset or Rainbow levels of swearing. Human Pinkie's likely too cheerful for that stuff.
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I’ll worry about aura colors later. Regarding swearing habits, Human!Rainbow will definitely swear the most of the human counterparts of the other Guardians, followed by Human!Applejack, Human!Pinkie (think Charlie from Hazbin Hotel), Human!Rarity, and Human!Fluttershy swearing the least.
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I’m now imagining EQG! Pinkie Pie having her own Susan 😅
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I actually plan on there being such a character among the CHS student body named Karen, who Twilight has to put in a particular amount of effort to convince.
Not much to say other than good chapter
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Thanks.
Whelp, hope Twi has a nice trip into the human world. Are Sunburst and Wallflower going to be joining her?
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I plead the fifth.
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OK, the court accepts your plea.
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In that sense, it does bring up the question on if Wallflower would run into her human counterpart, given she's the only one of the group (her, Sunburst, Spike, and Twilight) with a human counterpart in Canterlot High at this point.
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Wait until next chapter.
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It would be an interesting possibility. Could lead to a lot of confusion. Though maybe meeting her pony counterpart will help her come out of her shell somehow. Or maybe human Sunset could manipulate her into siding against them. Or maybe if pony Wallflower doesn't come with, Twilight and Spike can run into her and help out themselves. Guess we'll see soon enough.
After seeing how this Sunset talks, I can see why this story has an M rating.
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That’s not the Sunset born in Equestria.
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Yeah. That makes sense. Human! Applejack would probably be a less psychopathic (but no less protective of her friends) Millie from H! Boss. Similarly, Human! Rainbow would be somewhere along the lines of a less psychopathic Blitz from that same mentioned series. Human! Twilight (appearing in later books) would probably be more along the lines of Moxxie (though more of a benevolent mad scientist than a gun nut) - only swearing when it is necessary or when particularly upset (and I could definitely see her screaming "ARE YOU (CENSORED) FILMING US RIGHT NOW?!" when Human! Pinkie catches her and Human! Sunset during a moment [since Human! Pinkie would be the one most likely to have an "Aww, that is so cute/sweet" vibe off seeing them).
Thanks very much for getting the next chapter to this up. Definitely like the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated Wallflower and Sunburst both catching on that this is the Human Sunset off of the behavior and different aura color (in addition to Wallflower's foreshadowing for a villain Pony! Sunset is going to be facing sometime after returning to Equestria [who appeared assisting the Wicked Witch in your "Wizard of Oz" spin]).
REALLY looking forward to more of this.