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I hope Flash eventually learns if he really did have sex with the Princesses or not. If only for him to know for sure.

I'm so hyped for this one!

For awhile, I thought about the parade being where the alicorns and the citizens are naked, and the whole thing becomes an orgy where ponies have sex with each other, and even the royals. Maybe this can be a future story idea

Something tells me Twilight is the only one he's going to know for sure that he slept with.... And hes going to be a father through all of the alicorns.

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I would, but I can't remember where I found it

That was hot.... Poor girl is probably limping..... Also pregnant. Hopefully with twins.

Is this becoming a silly trend where Flash doesn't have any "confirmation" whether he actually f**ked with the Three Princesses in each story or not?

By this point, he has the right to finally know the truth, and be "official" with Celestia and Luna.

While Cadance will be very complicated, because of Shining.

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Well, because there's still one more to go after

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Maybe with an epilogue with him telling this to flurry in order to traumatize her so it doesn't happen with her too? (Note not serious, just something that popped into my mind was that flurry is the last canon alicorn.)

Edit: aaaand now im imagining a flash forward to flurry rebelling and using a glory hole or something..... And "uncle flash" being on the other side just cuz.

Well, that's another one down. Will Flash ever discover the truth? Will he manage to somehow get another princess under his belt and make it to full set? Find out next time.

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But the question is willing Twilight to try and hide the truth from Flash like the others? Personally, I don't see any reason for her to considering that she doesn't act like the other Princesses. She isn't afraid to just be herself around him.

So, I see no reason for her to disguise herself and just confront him honestly. I could see Twilight having sex with him as a thank you for saving her life, but she also confesses her long-time love for him.

If Cadance can marry a guard, then so can Twilight.

Wow, so that's three of the princesses pregnant with Flash's child now. Interesting info on how Flash was able to impregnate them too, thanks to his strong magic. I hope Twilight's next.

Mmm I wonder if the princesses will talk about the "father" of their children? Or will they deduce it?

Will Flash have the courage to talk to the princesses and ask his questions?

And finally, will Twilight be next? Or will there be some intermediate story?

A suggestion: how about the princesses try to seduce or flirt with Flash subtly? (Without confirming anything to him)

ok. this is more nuts then a peanut convention. is Twilight next?? or will it stay at 3???

came back to say i know there were a couple spelling/grammer mistakes so if you haven't already fixed them i will find them.

she reached into a draw that was locked

Her ships thrust upwards

she looked back at the draw and frowned

Whenever a pony Flash didn't know got close to the throat,

stuck in cancel meetings ever since

now for some more pedantic less necessary ones

floats were having their last minute checks down

not a spelling mistake per say but "check down" feels more correct then "Checks down"

and a night when he had had the best wet dream of his life.

no need for a second had but that is personal preference

i can't find any spelling or grammatical errors needing to be corrected on this page

again free of errors that i could spot. seems everything was concentrated in the first chapter. But i would advise re reading to be sure. Otherwise if you need an editor for your work i can lend some aid.

Good, but...

Will Flash ever discover the truth?

This bit is starting to get overdone now.

Now Flash has three mares on his Alicorn Princess Bingo Card.

Please tell me that bedding them and impregnating them line up with the Free Space.

"Not really. Cadance had to slip Shining a special potion when they made Flurry. She told me about it when they said they were pregnant. It's how I learned about all this. I'm guessing she must have slipped him the potion again." Flash heard this and his brain was going nuts with thoughts.

The potion Cadance said was originally for her husband back in the first story was probably another of that same potion. Imagine if an alicorn mare (Cadance) taking it instead of an alicorn's mate upped the minimum requirement of a mate's magic in order to conceive, but produced a stronger result. With Flash having also knocked up Luna and Celestia he'd clearly be capable of clearing a higher than normal hurdle with Cadance. I know this is purely my own conjecture, but I feel like Flurry's younger sibling going to be like her but on steroids. Hope they still have that scroll of 'Fledgling's Forbearance' to tie into the new foal's Crystalling. As for Celestia and Luna's own foals...good luck, ladies. Unless you have an ancient relic you can tie ritually tie such a spell to for maximum effect. Could the Canterlot Royal Foals be made honorary citizens of the Crystal Empire? Would that be enough to warrant them getting their own Crystalling?

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