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Fluttershy goes to visit Pinkie Pie. When she leaves Sugar Cube Corner, she eats a candy from the jar. Soon, she is transported to a weird world and her life is in danger. Will her friends be able to bring her back?

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It's really a shame that the cool fan fiction usually goes unnoticed. Have an upboat!

...:rainbowhuh: That was...interesting. Like, I guess? :rainbowhuh:

Maybe that's why Pinkie Pie invited Rainbow Dash to make cupcakes... :rainbowderp:

So is this...
I...
What...
EXPLAIN. I don't know what's going oooon!!! :raritycry:

1433129 YOU MUST TRY THIS CANDY:flutterrage:

Short, silly story about random, silly subject?

Inb4 feature box :facehoof:

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I understand critisim and usually don't argue but...

about random, silly subject?

Well, category is "random". And the story is a bit random. It's simple as that. :ajbemused:

Inb4 feature box

It's far from being featured I think. :rainbowhuh:

silly story

And about silliness... You think your clopfics are intelligent or what? :facehoof:

“Spike! Bring Fluttershy some water!” Twilight ordered his assistant.

Glad Twilight had the sex change, now if only Rainbow Dash would follow. Just a little slipup that stabbed my face, there's probably more.

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That's what they all say. If you check the feature box periodically you'll always see a one-shot about a pony (usually Princess Luna) doing silly things for 1000-2000 words.

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It's just what happens on FIMFiction. Random, silly stories about randomness and other nonsense tend to be shoe-ins for instant feature box. Rather annoying.

And about silliness... You think your clopfics are intelligent or what?

Where did I say that?

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Where did I say that?

Nowhere. I just wondered what kind of fanfics you find not silly.

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What I find not silly? Generally, fics that don't have the entire story revolve around something random or silly.

Whert? I'm... er, f-u-s-c-h-i-a? Diamond crystals. Of paper geode cyanide.
...Seriously, um, I don't really consider that funny.
Not bad, just not my kind of funny.

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Silly/random stories are good. Not everyone is capable, or willing, of writing the next "Eternal". Besides, the show revolves around silly/random. It's a kids show, do we need to fight over it?

Hmmm...Lyra might want some of that drug.

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Some people can't be reasoned with. Obviously this one is no exception.

Fluttershy had the best trip of her life! It takes some heavy shroom or acid to cause that kind of hallucination.

Or maybe it was just some Smile Dip.

this was.........well.......yea.........
question though: why didnt the methamphetamine with acid like symptoms affect pinkie pie? is it because her brain is already so freaking insane that looney drugs actually make her level out a bit?
Come to think of it, i could have sworn ive read another story recently where some pony goes tripping, and so does pinkie, but it hardly affects her.......

oh yea, dont remember the title, but in the story, pinkie is given something to make her a bit more normal, and it works, but then twilight takes some and tries it for scientific research, and she ends up tripping out and engaging in a cupcake war, and princess luna has to come to get her

That was silly. That was so totally silly. Five Stars! :pinkiehappy:

She showed the jar, which she kept in her hands, to Twilight.

which she kept in her hands

hands

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that set apart , take my thumps up and fav xD. For some reason i really enjoy ponies on drugs

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Will I ever get used to ponyfic terminology!? :raritycry: hooves not hands, hooves not hands! :facehoof:

Hmm, this story could use an editor. It's good, but there are allot of sentenses that seem choppy, also a few times need to be corrected.

Ex:

“What!?” Twilight trotted up to the nearest mirror. “But... my hair are just normal.” Twilight giggled.

Wow, Pinkie is an asshole in this story. Giving Fluttershy LSD, and then making Spike nearly shit himself with the "Oh, you'll only be paralyzed for the rest of your life". Yeah, and Spike is a young dragon, so the "rest of his life" is a LONG TIME.

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making Spike nearly shit himself with the "Oh, you'll only be paralyzed for the rest of your life".

I think it's rather some kind of http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/InnocentlyInsensitive Innocently Insensitive

1438567 True dat. Pinkie's one of my favorites, but she just looked downright idiotic here. :pinkiesad2:

I've seen plenty of stories about Stonershy but none about Acidshy. You have my approval.

Why bring shamans into the story?

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? Zecora is technically a shaman. And she was used here to get rid of Twilight for a while :rainbowhuh:

I like it.
Reminds me a small bit of a story about some people
in France who got hold of some bread that got spoiled by a certain type of fungus.
They ended up seeing things and acting strangely.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ergotism

I will stop channeling Twilight now.

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For some reason i really enjoy ponies on drugs

:rainbowhuh:ummmmm...wat:trollestia:

Twilight took the candy from Spike’s head. “I can’t believe Pinkie! This is neighthamphesaddline! The most dangerous drug in Equestria!” she said in horror.

Niegh-what now????

*studies word intensely for five minutes before it clicks*


Oh....you clever, clever writer. I see what you did there!

Jesse! We need to cook neighthamphesaddline!

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