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Mr B
I like Fallout Equestria, Changelings. and nerdy stuff.
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Another one? What a surprise
Nicely done and interesting fact. A diamond dog liking hot dogs, kinda ironic
Memories can be a curse and blessing.
Unless i confused things, nice reference to your other Story
nice work once again! this doesnt look much different from before the frost
interesting, i always wondered about the currency in frostpunk
That was heart warming. But seriously, what are those Bills
Very interesting
her dedication honors her
Smart girl
Nicely done and a mother always cares
busy indeed
not goona lie, her door struggle was kinda funny
Poor guy (hugs her)
her mother truly honors her supporting role
nicely done!
clever girl
oh dear
thats a relief and nice change
a good heart but risky plan
oh man...at least the healing worked
oh dear
oh heh
Its never easy
Enjoying the power but fearing the front you could say about percy
Tense
hope it works
ah darn it....
i did and happpy halloween to you too
To be honest, I struggled a bit in the first chapters because the references to frostpunk are vague at times (at leats after the first chapter) and my mind was like "where is the dread and survival aspect of the original frostpunk?". Catching up to this Update, I think the story expanded quite good without the need to adapt to much of the frostpunk storyline. Im excited to see what comes next for our group of resistence fighters.
Nice Story, keep up the good work
akward indeed
Nicely done and the sabotage Effects, kinda comedy
At least it wasnt in vain
You too! All the best!
Only thing I can say after reading this is... Come on don't leave us hanging here as you made it to have another sequel please make another one. Maybe make it to where they meet up at the big city from the first book. Please...
My thoughts on the story.
The characters were very bland, they had personality, but often they felt like each other and didn't have anything unique to their characterization or dialog.
If you didn't specify who was talking I wouldn't have known.
The voices and language were all the same, too. Nothing distinguished Diamond dog from pony except the implied perspective and rare use of any dog.
I didn't feel at all this was frost punk/ pony related. There was cold but it was only mentioned a few times, mostly at the start but it wasn't played on again.
Overall a good idea set in the wrong world.
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Yeah I do have to admit, this story isn't my best work.
While writing I often had motivational problems and it's apparent, so I've taken time to sit back and reconsider how I write. I had a lot of fun writing The Boy & The Bug and realised that if I don't enjoy a story as I write it, my readers won't enjoy it either. I tried adopting a style of having many short chapters but that came back to bite me in the end as everything moved too quickly. Proofreading is expensive and so every word written is another dent in my bank account.
I've decided that against what I may have wanted to do regarding my Frostpony AU, I'm gonna be writing a bigger story, one that I want to write. As for this one, I'll get around to writing a sequel that kicks things off properly.
Personality wise, I swear I thought I did more...