I'm a writer, science enthusiast, and a Christian. If you want a story you can read without worrying about language, you can be sure mine fit the bill.
I enter in a government sponsored competition to create a traveling devise. But one thing that people would least expect is what I intend to do. I intend to travel on all three plains instead of the one most thought of. Where will my invention take me and how will I get back if necessary?
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Eenteresting... VERY EENTERESTING, MY GOOD SIR. I LIKE IT, SO EVERYPONY ELSE SHOULD LIKE IT.
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And in case you, and no one else, has noticed, the main character is me. Not completely but partially.
1456858 I noticed. Partially. Only partially.
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I then percieve that your powers of perseption are greater than Ianticipated! I will try to reward this story with another chapter to keep up moral! TODAY IS THE FOR ALL GOOD THINGS TO BE DONE ME AND TO HELP MY BROTHER TO DEFEAT THE ENEMY WHERE HE IS! :}
1456897 I SHALL ASSIST IN DEFEATING THE ENEMY IF AT ALL POSSIBLE.
Unless I can't. Then I will not.
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Then grab wepon and shot head-crab officer!
1456928 Head-crab officer! Gah! The creepy buggers (lolpun) have struck at homes! MUST GRAB THE PHYSICS GUN!
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Ah... good times. How do you like the new chapter?
So this is your new story not bad still
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yes this is the story. 
Well, finished Chapter 2: The End.
I think in chapter 1, there's a "my" missing its "y", and the first time Sugar Cube Corner is mentioned in this chapter, the "Cube" isn't capitalized.
Didn't see anything misspelled.
Now, onto what I think of the story. Well, I gave ya a like. Maybe it's just the fact it's a human in Equestria that gets me, but I can't bring myself to favourite it. Don't get me wrong, good story, and I will be finishing it another day.
Nothing I'd nitpick about other than SOMETIMES it's a wall of text.
But hey, it can be a writing style if done correctly.
And I don't see it being done incorrectly.
If I were to rate it, have a 7/10 so far. That's pretty high by my standards, considering I've never given anything a 10/10. I'm a very picky reader about my stories.
I'll be back to finish soon(ish)!
Read only the first chapter,and I must say that it's not bad.It's pretty good actually.Continue like this.
1839151 not to mention that this one is done and the sequel is chugging on
also I am doing a read through with a friend and later on I will post it on youtube
I knew it was completed,and I also knew that you had a sequel to work on,that's why I said to continue it.Also,I finally read it all and it was very well written and amazing,with some grammatical errors here and there.
1839455 No one is perfect. But this reading might catch a few of those since in truth what I did was write it and put it up here
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I agree
it has alot of
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Dude
if this is real
i send you my phone # on a PM
so we can chat and see if I have a chance to travel with you
Because
My jimmies are rustle
in a level that not one has seen in their lives
1896652 Sorry good sir, I can't really do that until I have absolute confidence in you. It involves my obsession with absolute purity in Equestria, although since the war ended it has never been the same (spoilers). Not to mention I have very little idea want you mean by you jimmies... and in a way I'm slightly not wanting to know in a way.
1896236 Well that would be something you expect to happen when I get my science major after spending six years in college...
Quill, hate to mention my laptop was stolen, so I won't be able to record with you until we get it back. Be sure to read my story sometime. It's incomplete, but I have two chapters. Criticism needed.
1949790 Not that I'm the best...
And has that ever mattered to me? No. Now go read, and gimme your worst!
1950005 Give me some time, I barely even started the first chapter... Oh.. and do you mind if I use that pic of the pony you gave me a while back as an avatar?
Take you time. The one of Hamaan? Sure!