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Roof of the World

Yes this is an HiE but im trying to make it as original as possible, also this is my first fic so feedback and suggestions are needed and welcome.

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 2nd Jan 2012 · 1,708 words
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Chapter 2 · 22nd Jan 2012 · 2,419 words
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Sorry Guys · 10th Feb 2012 · 83 words
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Vash_ts

Vash_ts #1 · Dec 31st, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

you got some mispells, like the thru/through thing, also, why dont call fluttershy? she is a pegasus too...

FireHawk

FireHawk #2 · Dec 31st, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Didnt i explain it? mabey i forgot she was to busy with her animals. ill add that in when i upload chapter 2
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Meta Knight

Meta Knight #3 · Jan 1st, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Excellent

shira

shira #4 · Feb 10th, 2012 · · · Sorry Guys ·

Well thanks for ending it at least rather than leaving the readers wondering.

FireHawk

FireHawk #5 · Feb 11th, 2012 · · · Sorry Guys ·

206187 Cant tell if that was sarcasm.... regardless if you want to finish it be my guest

shira

shira #6 · Feb 11th, 2012 · · · Sorry Guys ·

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No quite serious. So many people just stop writing and never respond to their readers. I'm serious when I say "Thanks for at least not leaving us hanging."

Hope your next project works out.

FireHawk